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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person NinjaWitch
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just finished Ch 2. This is really good, I'm excited to read the rest. I think the real question is WHEN are they, as opposed to where.
person malfoysplaymate
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello there! Im so happy i got a new computer! my last one crashed three weeks ago and im finally up to date with my favorite stories. As usual superb chapters! come back soon!
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm having a deja vu and thinking that I may already have reviewed this chapter...but who cares, if you get two reviews I'm sure you won't complain.

Lucius in riding attire = melt. Lucius with riding crop = vaporize.

So Hermione's gone over to the other side at last! A character as intelligent and bossy as her has to have a dominant side, or at least I've always thought so. I'm worried about this threat that Hermione received, though...shit's gonna hit the fan eventually, is it not? Well, til then may Hermione and Lucius investigate many a painting at all hours of the day.
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I always like a thoroughly spanked Lucius. I'm sure Hermione does too. I like how they are 'sharing the power' so to speak. His masculine perogative aside, Hermione really does need to step in with the child-rearing. Draco was a git as he was written. She can't hava repeat of that.

I also loved Lucius' mental gyrations on the cost of the school. That was a nice bit. I think everyone would be the same way about the money spent, even if they figured for inflation. It's just the way the human mind works.
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I suppose Lucius won't be on horseback again any time soon. Though they do have all the magical lotions and potions to fall back on.

Hermione certainly took to that role as if to the manner born, didn't she? I can quite see her as a dominatrix, actually, rather than the other way around. I like the way Lucius pretends to be sacrificing his desires to hers when all the time he has been longing for a good thrashing, the wily coyote!

Beautifully, viscerally described; made me feel quite ouchy!
person tsorg
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very delicious. I like how you are able to bring out power for Hermione, I'm having the most awful time with that. Lucius keeps taking control on me, it pisses me off. I also like how you have Lucius beat his chest proclaiming his domination and Hermione gets in there and slaps him upside the head! You've got a really great balance going between such strong personalities. Though, I admit, I do really love it when Lucius takes control in your stories, especially in the bedroom, or maybe what leads up to sex, whether it's in the gazebo or a bedroom. I was rereading chapters because the spanking that led to hot sex.... all I can say is Good Lord! Your writing as always is so descriptively wonderful. Lucius in his billowy shirt and tan jodpurs. Lordy, lordy, lordy. I could just picture him. I loved your use of vituperation.
person Citten
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i know i quenched my thirst! and about time too. ;) well they both got a good taste for what they like and finding what they can be good at. :) boy he really found a jem in her didnt he? i really do want to see those riding lessons! (on real horses by the way.) ooohhh there are so many possiblities with that senero--but your the writer. :) that was just such a fun chapter! so hermione got a howler and threats and lucius is worried--i love it! so 'children' i love the idea. i also love that hermione is not going to let him have full say in rearing said children. so i am really looking forward to the conversation where they decide on said children. :) so do i really have to wait a whole week for the next chapter?! :) (just thought i would ask.....okay whine about it.)
person RhiannonoftheMoon
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You'll get no complaints about lemons from me! I look forward to each and every one. :) Great story - this is one of my favorite LM/HGs ever. I have a feeling that they will end up back in their own time, however. What will have changed? How will people accept their relationship? Did Severus survive?? When will they tell each other how they fee???

Don't answer any of those. ;)
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated! It always makes my day! :D

Uh-oh! So who is threatening Hermione? You know I can
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If that is how Lucius likes it, he should be thanking his lucky stars his wife enjoys dishing it out. Thanks for the lemons. So, Lucius is his own great-grandfather, or something like that? That kind of amuses me.