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Hmmm - the plot thickens. I so sympathesize with Hermione and her assets on display. Some stupid men can never look a woman in the eye, can they?

Lucius, you dirty dog! The ends justify the means though, right?

Keep up the great work, Lady!

Funny having Lucius pick out her frock LOL for me it was always the opposite, I was always the one picking out the dickheads clothing. He was so horrible at it that at one point while he was away training, he went to an event at a commander's house that said Casual Dress...idiot wore jeans, tee shirt and nikes....the commander asked him where his wife was immediately when he saw how he was dressed.....

Oh well....anyhow, enjoyed that little bit of intimacy, thats how I saw it, an intimate moment of bonding between the two of them.


Happy Writing!
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Ah Lucius. I should have guessed he'd encourage his new leaf to take yoga and pilates to gain the flexibility he wants to suit his needs. lol Great update, I can't wait for more!

I have been reading for two days,nonstop. I do apologize for not rewiewing before but you have to understand that I had to finish every chapter before I could calm down and write a review.
The storyline is fantastic. First your use of the Veil as a sentient being, purposely manipulating L&H to change the past. I think you have said you are a fan of Star Trek, I am too and the Veil made me remember a little the Guardian of Forever, you know, traveling trough a portal and altering the future. I am just waiting for it to say "All is right" once the timeline has been restored. I love the concept of time travel and restoring timelines.
Then the prophesy, how they slowly work it out, how it leads them to undoing the mistraetment of Squibs, the blackmail, the wierd uncle, and last but not least, H&L's fantastic chemistry.
Thank you so much for this story.
I just want to let you know I stll smile everytime I remember "The Wizard of Auds"...that was priceless.

Ah, the peacock and the peahen; a very apt image. And lots of feathers are being ruffled out in wider Wizarding society, which seems to be just as vicious and gossipy as the salons of the Muggle Regency. I like the idea that Lucius would 'sort them out' for Hermione though. He has a kind of Tony Soprano quality there, though Hermione and Carmela wouldn't have much in common.

The idea of Lucius ever blending into any kind of crowd is quite funny. He's not a bland type, is he? Oh no.

Anyway, you'll probably have updated again by the time I finish this review, so I'd better say a quick 'great chapter' and continue my day's reading.

FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK YEAH!!!! THIS WEEKEND WAS GREAT

Surprise the internet works just the same here in Dallas as it did in New Orleans...amazing. Finding a new chapter of yours to devour makes evacuation hell much better. Could the insight into her husband all part of the veil's plan? Are they going to become parents of the greatest squib of the wizarding world? So much to ponder. Thanks for something to think about.

Lovely and romantic chapter. I enjoyed the visual of Lucius and Hermione basking in the new bath. Thanks for the update!

hi im back and all caught up hope you did not think i had loved and left you lol

story is fab as always just when i think i have sussed it out you go and confuse me again lol i love how you do that.

update soon take care and huggs from the uk