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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who in the world would want to skip a chapter of this brilliant story? Seriously, as far as Lucius is concerned, never skip the lemons!
I don't know how I fell so far behind updates, but it was quite nice reading three chapters at once, although it did stop at the most inconvenient time! So here we go, three reviews in one!
chapter 38 - I imagine those pureblooded wives would drive Hermione round the twist! I would think hardly any of them would be blessed with more than half a brain.
I loved the tender moment in the bath and thats part of what makes your story so ace - the intricate plot, the gorgeous lemons and the way they are slowly falling in love *sighs*
chapter 39 - he snores?! Is there such a thing as a sexy snore because I'm pretty sure Lucius would be the one to pull that off! As long as its not rattle-the-walls, deafening snores, I can deal with it! It's a good thing Lucius takes such good pride in his appearance - showtime in those pantaloons? Front row seat, please. Those women will never be able to focus on Lucius' face. I had a giggle at Lucius' excitement at picking Hermione's dress - you could almost say he was a touch camp but he's definitely too masculine to be thought of as that for long!
chapter 40 - Lucius can use those charms on me any day! Wow! Lucius is crafty - he's planted the seeds about the squibs in those ladies heads while distracting them with his 'charms' and it won't be long till the gossip spreads. Also, with Lucius having set the record straight with the husbands it will hopefully help clear Lucius and Hermione's names of blackmail.
I knew those witches wouldn't stand a chance, although they may hate Hermione more for being such a lucky woman because I would imagine their husbands would be lacking compared to the mighty Lucius! Now I'm torn - Lucius with tight pants or hanging free. Mmm, I might just have to go and think about that one!
I may just have a dirty mind but I had a giggle at Hermione discussing 'broomstick handling' with those wizards. It's a wonder Lucius never picked up on that!
Anyhoo, I know the next chapter is going to be good (mmm, lemony goodness!) and I can't wait to see where the plot goes next.
I know you wanted details on my visit with Lucius so instead of dropping little hints in my reviews, I am working on it as a story! Eeek! I have never felt confident enough to write Lucius before so I am taking my time with it. It seems weird to write it about me so I'm thinking of either coming up with a new character or tweaking the story slightly to star Hermione. I'm not sure yet but I have got the basic story down - blow by blow as you said! I will have to pluck up my courage and get it sorted.
Enough from me, roll on chapter 41 - new skills are always fun to learn.
I don't know how I fell so far behind updates, but it was quite nice reading three chapters at once, although it did stop at the most inconvenient time! So here we go, three reviews in one!
chapter 38 - I imagine those pureblooded wives would drive Hermione round the twist! I would think hardly any of them would be blessed with more than half a brain.
I loved the tender moment in the bath and thats part of what makes your story so ace - the intricate plot, the gorgeous lemons and the way they are slowly falling in love *sighs*
chapter 39 - he snores?! Is there such a thing as a sexy snore because I'm pretty sure Lucius would be the one to pull that off! As long as its not rattle-the-walls, deafening snores, I can deal with it! It's a good thing Lucius takes such good pride in his appearance - showtime in those pantaloons? Front row seat, please. Those women will never be able to focus on Lucius' face. I had a giggle at Lucius' excitement at picking Hermione's dress - you could almost say he was a touch camp but he's definitely too masculine to be thought of as that for long!
chapter 40 - Lucius can use those charms on me any day! Wow! Lucius is crafty - he's planted the seeds about the squibs in those ladies heads while distracting them with his 'charms' and it won't be long till the gossip spreads. Also, with Lucius having set the record straight with the husbands it will hopefully help clear Lucius and Hermione's names of blackmail.
I knew those witches wouldn't stand a chance, although they may hate Hermione more for being such a lucky woman because I would imagine their husbands would be lacking compared to the mighty Lucius! Now I'm torn - Lucius with tight pants or hanging free. Mmm, I might just have to go and think about that one!
I may just have a dirty mind but I had a giggle at Hermione discussing 'broomstick handling' with those wizards. It's a wonder Lucius never picked up on that!
Anyhoo, I know the next chapter is going to be good (mmm, lemony goodness!) and I can't wait to see where the plot goes next.
I know you wanted details on my visit with Lucius so instead of dropping little hints in my reviews, I am working on it as a story! Eeek! I have never felt confident enough to write Lucius before so I am taking my time with it. It seems weird to write it about me so I'm thinking of either coming up with a new character or tweaking the story slightly to star Hermione. I'm not sure yet but I have got the basic story down - blow by blow as you said! I will have to pluck up my courage and get it sorted.
Enough from me, roll on chapter 41 - new skills are always fun to learn.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! He is charming and so considerate (and well demanding too - that goes back to the charm) of Hermione. Thanks for the update!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your description of his display of his assets reminded me of something I read years ago of women of this era dampening the underskirt of their gowns to make them cling and therefore more revealing. The more the world changes the more it stays the same. I love the fact that I can't figure out who is the blackmailer...well done. Thanks for your good thoughts for my family and our forced "vacation" from Gustave. We only lost power and a very large limb from our oak tree. Looking forward to tartness soon.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40:
The description of Hermione's shunning was quite effective. I can imagine the Lady's of the time would be quite hostile to Hermione for many reasons. One would be Lucius and the other is her outsider and unknown quantity status in their society. It was nice of the hostess to ensure Hermione had a companion, and nicer for Lucius to rescue her.
Oh and the scene between Lucius and the Ladies was just perfect. I could almost see all those biddies looking at him when the got a chance, wondering about their sex life. I do hope Lucius made his point clear, it doesn't seem like they had eyes for anything but his... Package.
Woo Hoo for the next chapter. Lucius is such a masterful lover, I'm sure Hermione will be beggin for more by the end of the chapter. I can't wait.
The description of Hermione's shunning was quite effective. I can imagine the Lady's of the time would be quite hostile to Hermione for many reasons. One would be Lucius and the other is her outsider and unknown quantity status in their society. It was nice of the hostess to ensure Hermione had a companion, and nicer for Lucius to rescue her.
Oh and the scene between Lucius and the Ladies was just perfect. I could almost see all those biddies looking at him when the got a chance, wondering about their sex life. I do hope Lucius made his point clear, it doesn't seem like they had eyes for anything but his... Package.
Woo Hoo for the next chapter. Lucius is such a masterful lover, I'm sure Hermione will be beggin for more by the end of the chapter. I can't wait.
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adored the whole checking each other out portion of the chapter. Hermione being protective of Lucius' "reputation" and worried over how tight his breeches were was cute.
I hope they can meet their aims with the dinner party without getting Lucius embroiled in a duel over some wife's honor or his own.
The dinner was very Austinesque with all the sexual undertones. I really loved the chapter and am sorry I missed the other one. Iguess I 'll have to check more often.
I hope they can meet their aims with the dinner party without getting Lucius embroiled in a duel over some wife's honor or his own.
The dinner was very Austinesque with all the sexual undertones. I really loved the chapter and am sorry I missed the other one. Iguess I 'll have to check more often.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh that clever man in his tight pants! I look forward to reading more of the party. Thanks for the update!
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 39 - go, Lucius, go!!! the Charm-Meister is at work and I think he is enjoying it, since his wife is fully aware that his charms belong to her at the end of the night. dare I hope we will learn know who the blackmailer is in just a few chapters? thanks for the fun chapter!!
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have piqued my interest. I know I've said it before, but Ilove this story and can't wiat to read more. Even if there are no lemons in the chapter.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As lovely and entertaining as ever, love. I am always happy to have more of your work to peruse. You've certainly set up an excellent tale thus far.
~Mia
~Mia