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I like this determined Lucius. Hermione's got a good thing coming! ;)

Finally, I am catching up on my reading and reviewing. Wowsers, 23 chapters for consummation and it was well worth the wait. That was really hot.

My favorite line this chapter, Lucius says: "You definitely have a way of keeping me humble."

Very interesting and inspiring bedroom artwork. The way your mind works is scary. It's too bad such things are not available in real life. Just for their educational value, mind you.

I love the "[i]t's broad daylight out[]" remark made by Hermione. What a hoot.

An insecure Lucius is a sight to behold. Hermione does keep saying things in what I would call Muggle terms (e.g. "working as a team"), and he in turn seems to take offense. This, I think, is one of the ways his confidence is being eroded. I believe they are having cultural misunderstandings.

OMG, six pages of mind blowing sex and then she says thank you, sir basically? These two are a riot. Hermione is a mess of insecurity and hang-ups and she has been emotionally scarred, I am sure. Each are afraid to show they care about the other. I bet Lucius could kick himself for offering "no strings" sex to Hermione in the first place.

As for the Orb--a clue, at last!

I'm sorry I missed three chapters. I have issues...and I needn't have worried so much as far as your writing is concerned. Silly me. I'm just going to trust that you have a very tasteful take on all things erotic from now on.

Regarding your latest chapter. Squee! I was freaking at the lawyer guy getting the upper hand...then, OMG second wand. Hermione is far to clever to be bested and/or helpless. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. It is safe to say...although I enjoy good smut, I'm happily in the mystery lover camp too! Thanks for the updates. Bless.

The Lawyer? Never thought of him! Dang! Go Hermione!

Now, the answers seem so near, yet, so far.

I often wondered about 2nd and 3rd wands. Thank heavens Hermione had one.

Heck! That chapter moved so fast it was a case of 'blink and you've missed it!'.

The blinking solicitor?! Hadn't seen that one coming! I'd twigged you're other mystery with the warden - but I had no idea with this one!

Two wands, very clever - providing you can find two wands that will choose you.

And Lucius thinks he's a guest? Or is it an accomplice who's polyjuiced - if polyjuice has been invented.

Thanks for updating. I am enjoying reading this.