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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Voracious_Reader
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, a mystery cliffie! but aren't they supposed to 'kill the root' so the tree can die? please update soon!
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the mystery unfolds, YAY! I love a good mystery....and a good horror tale....I might write one for Halloween......could be fun.....anyhoo.


I wonder....perhaps the veil will act as a modern day wood chipper when they toss him through....eww...that was gross wasnt it.....


Cant wait for it to all unfold and of course for the celebratory lemons......



Happy Writing!
S_G
person WhiteWitch
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@42-44
person WhiteWitch
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that...finger error. I'm so happy I was right about Nesbitt and I think letting the Veil deal with him is just perfect.
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 44

I like the way Lucius dealt with Nesbitt. I
person Jesse
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel really nervous about them going to the Veil!! I hope nothing bad happens!! Anyways.. I love the little tender moments between H and L. H has really got under L's sking hasn't she??!?!
person godblessemohair
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I do believe I've read The Wedding... I've got to get over my lurker habits, lol.

Who is The Master if it is not Voldemort? Perhaps I missed this somehow.
person doodle
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am afraid that the veil will suck them all in and send them back to the future. I like them in this era. Maybe the veil will send Nesbitt to the future as a squib! I lok forward to the next installment.
person Citten
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as well it shouldnt be either! :) i can just feel there is lots more! besides i dont think it could be that easy i succebited that he might be part of it he seemed very shaddy, espiecally with the fact that he wanted to know emeditatly what hermiones status was when they arrivied. so i now wonder what you have for us next! :) i love how upset lucius got once hermione told him what happened and he 'stuned' him when he wanted to do more--much more. there is that ferce portection part of him that i love! i also love that she clung to him so to feel that comfort and releif from him. :) it is so sweet. and it was fun to 'watch' the reaction of the retelling of what happened in -her- past. one question though i thaught that ron did write and tell his dad of the drawing room floor in the book? are you tweeking that for the purpose of the story? if you are that is okay but i was just courise. :) untill next chapter!
person blue artemis
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I would totally go for Lucius if it was he against Ron, especially with books. And I find that bit of Death Eater in him quite attractive.