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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 46:
She had better do something about those names. No way should any child be saddled with them, unless they are ancient Greek and DEAD.
I love the way the Veil coerced Hermione into confessing that she loved Lucius. I do think the Veil had something to do with the baby, but let Lucius think he was the one to screw up. He needs the practice in guilt.
Great job on the !three hours! of sex. I want the veil to summon me, even if it is with my own husband (he's cute as a bug, but no Lucius Malfoy...)
I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold.
She had better do something about those names. No way should any child be saddled with them, unless they are ancient Greek and DEAD.
I love the way the Veil coerced Hermione into confessing that she loved Lucius. I do think the Veil had something to do with the baby, but let Lucius think he was the one to screw up. He needs the practice in guilt.
Great job on the !three hours! of sex. I want the veil to summon me, even if it is with my own husband (he's cute as a bug, but no Lucius Malfoy...)
I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@ 46
I should have put this in my list last time I reviewed, so I'll do it now. I LOVE that Lucius smells like lime. I love lime and it seems to fit perfectly! Anyway, hooray for babies and confessions of love! What a sappy, sweet chapter! So, now that they are getting everything fixed, they should be heading back right? You're not going to leave them in the past are you? I know, I konw, you can't answer, but I can't help but ask! Good job! Can't wait for the next chappie!
I should have put this in my list last time I reviewed, so I'll do it now. I LOVE that Lucius smells like lime. I love lime and it seems to fit perfectly! Anyway, hooray for babies and confessions of love! What a sappy, sweet chapter! So, now that they are getting everything fixed, they should be heading back right? You're not going to leave them in the past are you? I know, I konw, you can't answer, but I can't help but ask! Good job! Can't wait for the next chappie!
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Er, Clytemnestra murdered her husband in his bath and then chopped up Cassandra, his concubine. I vote 'no' on that one. And a boy named 'Aggie' is going to have problems. Big ones, Malfoy or not. LOL. What about Beaufort (beautiful strength), Donald (world Conqueror),or Dominic (Ruling Lord)? Or Delinda (Of beauty), Zita (The Seeker-bit of a pun), or Thalassa (the sea), or Tezcocoatl (Serpent King in Aztec). They can nickname him Coco. Sorry, getting silly, there. Wonderful chapter, glad to know they solved it, but do they stay there or will they go home to a changed world? If their world is altered, they may no longer have a place in it, as well as having to adapt to changed memories, since the Voldemort wars may not have ever taken place, really.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I'm not sure if I was expecting that or not!!! I am really in the air about it right now, but I am sure you will do an amazing job with it.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story....it i love the interaction between lucius and hermione..thanks for being so amazing...
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For ch. 38-41 -- LOL! Paperweights, indeed... So, since I saw "Clue" the other day, I offer the following theory: It was the lawyer, in the ballroom, for the purpose of obtaining the 'paperweights,' with the "Little Book of Pureblood Semi-Public 'Sneezes'" (which is not so little or light after several decades of notations). Yeah, that's it. :D
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 42 -- Wow... Somehow, despite my guessing, I really didn't quite see that coming. LOL! Let's hear it for preparedness. Go Hermione! On another note, don't you just love Malfoy hospitality? 'Excuse me, sir, would you perhaps care for a little fiber to go with your tea? What's that? Forget the tea? You're a little tied up at the moment? Ah well. Maybe another day?' *snorts* I find it funny to see that Hermione may have been the one to establish the signature 'Malfoy hospitality' she experienced before the Veil. (probably wasn't her that started that one, but it's an interesting & amusing thought to play with for awhile.)
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(2nd attempt *hating maintenance sessions here*)
Alrighty... My previous review is actually supposed to be for Ch. 43 - not Ch. 42. *banging head on desk* So sorry for any confusion. :P
Re. Ch. 44: Poor Lucius. Just a little shocking for him to find out that he was just a breath away from being nailed 8 ways to Sunday because Draco had loose lips. I did enjoy his little panic attack at Hermione's knowledge and how she acquired it.
At this point, I guess I'm curious whether Nesbitt is the Master or not. And if so, if the 'first time around', he was obliviated (and maybe had his magic blocked as a bit of poetic justice) and somehow "recovered" his memories. Just some thoughts that ran through while reading.
Alrighty... My previous review is actually supposed to be for Ch. 43 - not Ch. 42. *banging head on desk* So sorry for any confusion. :P
Re. Ch. 44: Poor Lucius. Just a little shocking for him to find out that he was just a breath away from being nailed 8 ways to Sunday because Draco had loose lips. I did enjoy his little panic attack at Hermione's knowledge and how she acquired it.
At this point, I guess I'm curious whether Nesbitt is the Master or not. And if so, if the 'first time around', he was obliviated (and maybe had his magic blocked as a bit of poetic justice) and somehow "recovered" his memories. Just some thoughts that ran through while reading.
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 45 -- Grrrr...., Lucius. LOL! Him and his secrets (not to mention his ego - thank goodness for Hermione :D ). So, I was wrong about Nesbitt - he was just a 'bit' player. I do like your line-up for the Master. Very apropos. I'd go into further detail, but I don't want to spoil for those that read the reviews before the story.
I can't believe the ride's almost over. It's been such fun. Thank you for all your hard work & for sharing this!
I can't believe the ride's almost over. It's been such fun. Thank you for all your hard work & for sharing this!
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
adjudicate - great word. Okay so here is my theory...The root dies the tree dies but not before Hermione becomes pregnant continuing the Malfoy line and the future Lucis is actually his own grandfather. (I blame it on an old Disney song that my children listened to.)