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Seriously, LaBib, this time YOU'RE reading MY mind. I'm Greek so I CONSTANTLY joke about naming children, pets, ANYTHING, Agamemnon and Clytemnestra! You're killing me. I'm practically peeing my pants over here.

Good Veil, facilitating a wild sexy reward for Hermione & Lucius's good work.

And YAY for confessions of love!

Those names!!!!I laughed so hard I almost peed!! Almost!!
Is this the wind down to the big finally??? I wonder what pre-natal care was like back in those days?? If this is indeed the wind-down can we have one more good tangy lemon cuz your so good at it! *Strokes ego*
Maybe one more interesting painting???
Please?? For me??? Since I was so good at reviewing????
Much Love
XxXx

Oh, sometimes the damsel in distress stories are relaxing because they

You know, I think the Veil might be female. Its just a lot more tuned-in with Hermione's way of thinking and seems to spend more time 'laughing' at Lucius in a 'its not you're fault you're a bloke' sort of fashion. Plus the whole 'full body orgasm' I don't think fellas can feel orgasm past their bits and bobs.

Three hours! And Lucius isn't 'shooting dust' and they're not red-raw with friction? Or exhausted through lack of replacement nutrients? Or dehydrated? Or just plain unconscious??

WHOA! SLOW DOWN! After three hours, the sperm won't have met the egg! Never mind fertilized and started dividing!! You're looking at six weeks before a foetus is developed enough to have a heartbeat! So, Hermione's suddenly gone from 'normal' to six weeks pregnant in about five hours? EH? What's the veil playing at? SURELY it can't change Biology THAT much? Though, if it can change time...

oooh, maybe she is six weeks gone then. Ooops, but a happy oops.

Me Lucius. Me got wife up duff. Me man. Hear me roar! Grrr.

Ewwww. warm, gooey and probably in need of a bath. *icky shudders*

You know, I hope they have a girl! Because the purebloods still are in the "male heirs are important" and women are inferior. If the MALFOY'S have a girl and treat her just like a boy, then they'll bring the status of women up in the magical world!!

How much wine as she had at dinner and at parties?

"Clytemnestra" sounds like an STD. *runs for her life*

I think Hermione should beat him about the head and neck with a broken bottle for even mentioning those horrible names. But she can't say she didn't have fair warning that Lucius would favor hideously pompous and impossibly wretched names for his child/ren. This was a marvelous chapter, and I have enjoyed it more than I probably should have. It's good to have you back love. But please, pretty pretty please, don't make me turn blue waiting for the next installation. A girl needs her fix, you know. Thank you, as always for sharing your devious and sensationally smutty mind with us. Ah who am I kidding. I don't care if you write for the rest of the population or not. But I'd happily lock you in a basement somewhere and force you to write for my own personal entertainment. Giggle. Don't be too frightened. I'm about as intimidating as a hairless chinchilla.

~Mia

@46
You are so much fun to read, I'm still smiling about Agg & Clyt.
I love the naughty Veil, what a pleasant way of telling you you are right.
And the baby scene was fantastic. The exchange of "Are you very unhappy?" Then Hermione's insecurity "Is it me?" and Lucius sweet "I never meant to take the decision away from you". Everything was perfect, including Lucius "You love me? Trully love me..."
Sometimes a chapter flows perfectly and that is how I feel about this one.
Thank you.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more. I am glad that they are having a baby.

Ch. 46

That was lovely! I

***sigh**** I love babies....and I love men who get all gooey over babies.....

Considering I'm 8 months pregnant, I'm really quite willing to tell Lucius that those are not good names. That was quite a lovely chapter, I liked the hot sex, and the declarations of love were very sweet.