rate_review Reviews

Chapter 46

In response to your response: Perhaps it is because I simply cannot get enough of your writing LaBib. I would have happily read 30 more chapters of this story. :P In any case, I just thought that I'd try my hand at constructive criticism thinking that it might help in subsequent story structures.

I understand your writing method. It mirrors my own. (Although you are far more prolific than I am!)

Ok...enough about that. Onto the chapter!
______________

Wah! I just had this image of the Veil being sold as the ultimate sex-toy! *snerk* Maybe that's how time turners came about...

"They both lost consciousness at the same moment." Was it dehydration? All those fluids...spent and spilled.

Pregnant! Oh that darn Veil! ... Oh wait... Nope Lucius all the way!

Aw! Declarations of love! Yay! And a head to toe list of that which Lucius loves about Hermione too! Did you know that in medieval literature the object of affection (when it is female) is nearly always described starting from the head. This little tidbit is significant because the warrior (and therefore the men) were described starting at the feet and moving up towards the head/helmet. Neat that you just reminded me of this.

All in all a lovely follow up to the previous chapters. Hm...do you think I'll get a spanking if I volunteer to mention the unfortunate name? That might tip the scales for me.

Ah! Ah! Ah! BABY!!!! ~_~ ~_~ ~_~ ~_~

You would not believe how happy this makes me. Now...this raises a few questions though: First...is this baby going to be the new heir for the Malfoy family? Will the Malfoys stay pure-bloods? If not, will this affect their position in Voldemort's war? It would be ironic, however, if they went back to the future and discovered some random family like the Weasleys had taken the Malfoys place in the war.

Well..enough random gibberish. My poodle says hi (what?) She's a tea-cup, and therefore easily transportable (five pounds). If I didn't think that would be beyond weird, I might read the story aloud to her.

I'm glad that you bookmarked my story for later. My newest one is going to be good...I just feel it!!

Luv, Dragonfyre

Great! I think Calliope for a girl or Orion for a boy. Will the little one travel back through the veil? Now I'll have a great deal of new pondering to do. Thanks!

Perhaps Hermione can leave a book of baby names beside the chamber pot for Lucius. Clyt!!! That's just too funny. No-one would dare mock Little Miss Malfoy though. They'd find themselves getting shoved through the veil.

Is this winding down now? Are they staying or going back? What's next for you? And where can I get me one of those veils? (If they were that aroused just standing on the dais, imagine the orgasms they could've had shagging on it)

Mmm, Clyt-short-for-Clytemnestra - classy! Ah, I did wonder about all bets being off in the gazebo, but I didn't like to say anything ;). It was good that he reacted by wondering if Hermione would be angry with him for taking the choice away, rather than being all seigneurial (my favourite word of the moment) and assuming that she would be delighted to bear the Malfoy heir.

That Veil is some aphrodisiac! I loved the intensity and breathlessness of their scrambling to sate their aroused desires. Very spontaneous!

LaBib,
I feel like a horrid wretch for the unbelievably long time between my reviews. Alas, RL has gotten away from me (that and my ISP has left me without service for altogether a week and a half...makes for difficult R&Rs)

Now on to the review...Chapter 46

Lucius, Lucius, Lucius...what are we going to do with you? Casting a blanket spell to negate Hermione's magic within the gazebo. Did he not think it would negate the magic cast on Hermione as well as the magic she used herself? Yet another instance where a man is being led by his other head. LOL

Those names...good gods, do they want their child to be ridiculed all their life? Clyt...honestly!

I am glad that they finally admitted their love for one another (even though technically Lucius already had...but you can never believe anything a man says when he's getting serviced)

Awww, forever. But will it be forever in this time or their own time considering the Veil confirmed that the root has been destroyed? Rhetorical question, as always.

I look forward to the answer in upcomming chapters!
MHS

oooooh I want to squee! I enjoy how romantic they've become. I lovely and appropriate declaration of love for them. Hermione read like she was freed to feel, after second guessing herself for so long. Lucius would never have gone first...would he? The baby makes me squee again! Wonderful update, thanks so much!

ch 46 - oops.... gazebo..... that totally slipped by me just as it did with Lucius and Hermione. well, they have to have a boy sometime who will become Lucius' great-grandfather! btw, have I told you that I've grown to like your Veil? thanks for the new chapter!!

Yay LaBib! I am so happy you updated! *Scary does her happy dance.*

It took twenty minutes for Lucius to guide Hermione through the crowds and out of the bowels of the Ministry to the floo exits and into their bedroom, and twenty seconds for him to strip her, pierce her, and bring them both to the first of that afternoon