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Oh now you've left me pining......I wanted to cry with Lucius in his cell. What a totally exciting story and you aren't even done yet! I'm wondering of course what Hermione's relationship with Draco is.....

Love this story! But really, you need to think of your readers' blood pressures when you end chapters like that. Hmph. I am extremely curious about how you will close up this fic in only 2-3 chapters, it seems as though they just got dropped into a whole new set of problems. Though Hermione obviously is close to the Malfoy family in the new timeline, since Draco called her "Hermione." She better not be married to Draco. I would be very upset. Though I don't think you would do that after spending forty-some chapters getting Hermione and Lucius together. At least, I hope not :(

OH NO!!! What is going on!!!?!!?!?!??! I need to know!! Update quickly please!!! I love this story, and I just can't believe that it is actually going to end!!! What a cliffy though!! HURRY PLEASE!!

I finally just got caught up on this story and I am so happy that I put in the time to read this wonderful, beautiful story.

If I were to go chapter by chapter and list all the amazing things that I found in you story, we'd be here forever. So instead, I am going to write a blanket "Oh my GOD, that was just frigging amazing!!!!!!" And we're going to be done with that.

Chapter 47:
How could you do that to them? Does this mean that Hermione's married to Draco, but still carrying Lucius' kid? Because if so, wow. Even I wouldn't go there. . .

Fantastic!!!!!

you so better be updating sooner than a week or i may just have to find you and mamne you until you do! :) poor lucius! poor hermione! well i cant wait to see what you have cooked up for a back story on this one! :) though 49 and an epiclog is just doesnt sound long enough. i am already looking forward to a new story just because this one is ending. hey question for you have you ever taught of a story where hermione goes back in time to when lucius was in school? i know i would love it if you wrote one! ;) well just a taught! i do love that she is in the manor though and draco knows her. she must be so distraught! the pain lucius must be in! i really hope that you update really, reallly, really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

*screams* Oh my goodness! I'm all panic-y (I don't know how to even spell it!) I was drawn in to that veil and the potential for a happy ending. I should have realised that you are far too clever to make it that easy. I eagerly await your next entry. Thanks! Goodness, I think I need to have a lie down....

ohh wow what a twist!! poor Lucius he must feel terrible. But he will be rescued wont he? please update soon!!!

You evil hag! That's a "thank you" for all good thing Lucius did? And Hermione ending with the spoiled child Draco? Urgh!

I should actually be writing a review of the scientific literature for my uni project! oh well...

Bad name, that! lol!

It wants them to go back through. Why? They're happy! If it aint broke, don't fix it!

Is it safe to go through the veil while pregnant? Surely that's quite dangerous to something so fragile as a foetus?

Why's it suddenly all gone italic?

So... Draco knows Hermione, Lucius is thrown back in Azkaban.

What would I like to see...
I want to see what the academy is like! And I'd like to see what happened to Filch! He's so badly mistreated at Hogwarts - and he could be so much more!

Have any muggle technologies crossed into the magical world thanks to the Lynx? Is Arthur's obsession and 'taboo' with muggle items a thing of the past?

I want to see Harry and Ron's reaction to her pregnancy and marriage... hang on a minute - has the veil transferred their legal documents about their marriage to this time? Are they married in the eyes of the law in the future?

What happened to Narcissa if they are still married?

What happened to the brothel - what is it in modern times? (Oh, I hope it isn't a Starbucks! Good grief! They're like a plague on shopping centers and highstreets! It would be awful for the brothel to be a bloody Starbucks!). I've an image of it being a really brilliant lingerie designer! Maybe they still make beautiful knickers!

What else... are the little green 'sticks' still on the mantelpiece? And is Draco aware that they're not just ornaments?? I can see Hermione blushing, Lucius laughing and Draco not having a clue! lol!

anything else... can't think of anything

Now that's an eeeeevil cliffhanger