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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG
I'm clearly one who reads but does not review. I apologize for that. I should really since I love this story so dearly, and if not for that but to return the favor of your wonderful reviews.

My heart is breaking. Absolutely breaking for Lucius. I don't know why Lucius more so than Hermione, but it is. Probably because she was sent somewhere comforting, and with someone there, although I'm questioning Draco's appearance (I have a horrible feeling about it).

Oh I hope the next installment is fast, I don't think my lil 'ol heart could take it if I were to wait too long! haha.

I won't bothering with asking the questions you're sure to get about their seperation. I'll just wait impatiently to find out. haha

Until next chapter.
dM
person Damiana
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 47

*points to the above number* You know...maybe if I had never read anything of yours and I saw a count above 60 I might think twice about getting started. Yet I expect that anyone who has moved past reading stories that go above 25 or 30 chapters will likely not feel particularly squeamish about getting more of a really good author's story (I mean you!). I tend to simply read large stories by spurts (and bookmark my current chapter in Explorer).

Gah! With all that I haven't the time to read the chapter. Review to follow once I've read. :P
person Rini
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
okay...that was just mean....i cried....poor lucius and hermione....after all that they got seperated...good stuff better happen missy *wags finger*...cause if not i am going to pout like there is no tomorrow..
person Robyn Hawkes
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I,m puzzled. How come Draco seems all right with Hermione being in the Master bedroom while Lucius is in Azkaban?
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so hate you for the last part of this chapter!
But the story really is amazing. I love how you put them in the past and your ideas. I never even suspected Gus, it's truly one of your best stories!
And please, pretty please update soon, I'm dying to know what's happening!!!
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was unexpected!!!

Let's see you write your way out of this one, Labib. You made Lucius cry!!!
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aargh! Oh no, how can they be separated?

I was panicking when they were gonna step through the Veil that there was going to be a terrible cliffhanger about where they would end up. Then Hermione's without Lucius although it's comforting that Draco isn't totally shocked to find her in his father's room. Poor Lucius, stuck in that nasty cell again. He's just lost with Hermione and he doesn't even know what's happened to her. I'm an emotional wreck with all this drama, woman!

Awesome chapter and I can't wait to see what awaits them in this new future. I can't believe the story is almost done though. I want to know what happens but I don't want it to end either - I'm torn!


I don't have LiveJournal but thanks for the offer. My story was just starting to come along but I've been distracted with writing a oneshot for Halloween with Draco. I will focus on Lucius once that's out of the way. After all, a wizard like Lucius deserves a lot of attention, in fact he demands it!
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know I was apprehensive reading this whole chapter. I kept thinking, if they are happy and snug-a-bug in their 19th century home, they shouldn
person sweettiff_14
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AH! You are so mean! Well, they made it back safely, but now we have to wonder how Hermione is going to get Lucius out and why Hermione is in the bedroom and if the baby made it safely. Great chapter. I love that dang arch, but I feel bad for Lucius. I hope you update soon!