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So I just read the first chapter and I'm very, very interested in your story. Been avoiding school work and feeling sick lately, so I'm procrastinating with fanfic, and I can't wait to read the rest of your story.
I see you have it listed as 47 chapters, wow! Will there be more? I take it the story is not completed as yet? Is it?

Oh NOOOOOOO, Lucius is in Azkaban! That was a truly shocking moment; I feel really upset for them, after they had worked everything out so neatly.

I thought it was funny that Lucius was jealous of the Veil preferring Hermione, and I always wondered if he was worrying about Draco, so it makes a lot of sense that he'd want to go back. Funny how Hermione wanted to stay for the tightly-trousered crotches, LOL.

I hope he makes it out of that awful prison before the baby is born...update soon!

Wow. That was a bit of something, wasn't it? I doubt Lucius would spank a pregnant Hermione, it wouldn't be good for her. What is Draco doing there? (Yes, I figure he lived in the Manor). Anyway, I didn't know when I was going to get to read this, since my little son decided to make an early entrance into this world, last Wednesday. He was in the NICU until Monday, and then decided to be nocturnal. He's sleeping now, so I'm OK. Yes, he's my first, and after 21 hours of labor and 5 days of NICU, I'm not quite sure he won't be my only.

No!!!! I want to cry with him. Okay I'll calm down eventually, all good stories must twist. In the manor with Draco not surprised to see her, something to think about. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.

ACK!!!!! Oh NO! :(

chapter 47

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Dun dun dun!

Egads! I didn't even think that he might be returned to prison... but if things are mostly back to "normal", why is Hermione in Malfoy Manor?

Aw, the poor kids. I hope she's not with Draco now. That would be terrible after all they've been through. (Not that I'm against Hermione/Draco, but still...)

I enjoyed that Lucius was saddened by the fact that the Veil didn't like him as much as it did Hermione. Trust him to pout about that.

The money conversation was hilarious. Of course it would mean a great deal to Lucius, even more than if he died going back through. Idiot.

I can't wait for more. I want to see how you resolve this and how they get back together. Poor Lucius, I do feel for him.

Thanks for the well wishes for my new grandbaby. He's just beautiful.

What an incredible story! I just cried when I got to the last posted chapter. It must be so hard for them now.

Just read chapter 47.

You heartless monster. :D

I love it, more, please!

Ah poor Hermione!!!! I know Lucius is a changed man now but he still commited his crimes but if he's still married to Hermione, when would he have married her and gotten her pregnant. Does she still have her job in the ministry? if so she would still have easy access to the veil, will it council her on how to free her husband or has the veil ceased to interfere with their lives? Or.....will Lucius just convieniently get released on parrol?(I couldn't see you doing so so easily)
My head hurts thinking of all the possabilities!!

Great chapter though!!!