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Yay! St. Merlin it is. I want to see what changes have been effected on the Lynx. I love this story, and as it winds down, I know I'm going to miss it.

I liked how the Veil gave them all the happy memories of Lucius' incarceration and bypassed the nasty Azkaban moments.

I think that after this chapter I simply love you!
You're doing the most perfect job with the time change and everything. I bet it's really difficult but it's a wonderful story! And the veil is merlin, I never would have thought!
Well, I'm looking forward to next chapter

What a great chapter!

I really am trying to catch up! Eek!

I loved the line, "... but if you kiss me now, all that will be attacked is the inside of these pantaloons." Really had me laughing hard! Thanks!

CH 48 :The candle crumbled in her butt!!! LMAO that was hilarious!!! I almost spit peanut butter cup on my laptop! So...Merlin eh? What is it that makes old wizards so meddlesome I wonder?


On another front....did you see the premiere of Brotherhood? SO hot! I did a happy dance that Michael cheated on Kath but then nearly died when he told that chick to shut up and fuck LMAO was TOOOOOOOOOO funny....and Isaacs is tooooo hot.....wasnt bad on Entourage either, though his appearances were too short by far...


Anyhow, yahoo! Hope Lucius didnt don the boxers....I need to reread and make sure I didnt miss it......


Happy Writing!!!!!
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I wasn't worried at all. I knew you wouldn't leave our Lucius in that nasty old cell for long. This is a wonderful story and I've enjoyed every minute of it. There's been humor, love, mystery and hot sex. Who could ask for more? Well, you obviously thought we deserved more because you also had a scary beginning, a new twist on time travel, Lucius' version of "turning over a new leaf", an original muggle villain, and Merlin as the Veil. Oh, and did I mention outstanding writing. Wow! You have definitely raised the bar. When you spoil us like this, we now expect regular treats. LOL

Ch. 48

I have a technical question for you: How detailed do you make your outlines? Mine tend to be pretty sketchy for the most part, but your writing is far more intricate than mine, so I was curious if the difference was technical as well as stylistic.

Another stellar chapter! I love that Lucius thought of this for Hermione. He handled himself splendidly.

A great chapter! That scene with Hermione in the shop getting fitted was so amusing!

OMFG! You did NOT just do that?!
I read for two days and THAT was the cliffhanger?!
Cruel, cruel, that was just cruel!
He's back in Azkaban?! WTF?!
And they're both crying?!

Okay, rant is over.
Update SOON, pleasssssssssse. :)