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great, wonderful, fantastic!! love the new chapter. i enjoy the way you write these two characters, your descriptions bring them to life for me. I also like that although each seems to irritate the other in some way...which is natural in some respects for this couple, each also is scared/worried about losing the only connection to the past (future?). Will do my best to patiently wait for the next installment, although its hard as i am curious to know what happens next.....until then, Happy Writing!!

ooooo i wonder where they are? update soon!

This was wonderful LaBib! I keep laughing at all the bickering going on between Lucius and Hermione. She certainly didn

WOW once again I'm captured by your story!! Can't tell you how much I've been looking forward to this one,
you have a gift for writing!
Well I'll retrive back to my lurking position ;) Just wanted to let you know I love all of your stories XD

For a chapter that seemed to not move very far, I think I learned a lot. Lucius is biased and fashion sense. Hermione has transfiguration talent. Of course I find it amusing that Lucius is wearing clothing transfigured from forest detritus. I just imagine him thinking about the fact that "I am wearing leaves on my head..." LOL.

Cool. Thanks for the email, I was glad to see a new story, and this one started with a bang, I must say.

Lovely, and I like that he managed to be chivalrous, even though he was annoyed.

Hee.

I just love the banter, it's like an evil Death Eater version of a forties-era movie. Actually, the whole first part of the chapter reminded me of a movie called "It happened One Night" with Clark Gable and Claudette Colbert. Check it out if you haven't seen it. It's cute.

Lucius, is of course, Lucious in your story. Hermione is just too cute. I can't wait to see what happens!

Oh chapter 3! Short of an ode, here's a review...


Hehe! "Damned twittering" Now we know that Lucius isn't a morning person... also the "moos" made me laugh out loud (despite expecting them a little...) And I think that the expectation of Lucius' hair as cow feed is even more hilarious.

"He shook her like a little rag doll, angry with his stinging face, his cow-licked hair and most of all the tiny batterer being treating to a taste of his uneven temper." --> ...being treated to... (Unless I mistak eyour meaning, of course.)

What a fantastic chapter! The plot hasn't really thickened yet but I can already tell that it will be delicious... hmm...Lucius en Sauce...