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That was a fascinating look at the past.

hi:) end in such a beautiful moment, when they're renting a room, who knows what can happen... you're torturing me.
Just put them it bed together and relieve my suffering... ;P And seriously, I love it, the tension between them, and funny quotes of Lucius, (I giggled few times), I'm waiting for some more
Great job
Regards

J.L.K.

Oh LaBib I love this story so much! I want to read it all now!!! Lol

Really you write so divine. I am always so flattered that you like my stories because you are absolutely the bomb!!! Your Lucius is so well drawn, I just want to crawl into bed with him and help him with his poor arousal problem. Poor guy. LOL
I love it! Of course it sounds like most of the female population of London wants to help him with this problem as well. Indeed, I could just feel the sexual energy just buzzing around him, his masterful presence making all the girls swoon. He truly is a scoundrel and I love it. The woman with the handkerchief had me laughing. :D

Now as to your descriptions, the sites and smells of Regency London just come alive in your prose. Really I feel like I am there, experiencing this along with Hermione and Lucius.

I also love how you write the prickly relationship between Lucius and Hermione, which is just brimming with sexual tension. I agree with FlowersBecomeScreens about that hilarious paragraph where Lucius tells Hermione

Chapter 5!

Happy to oblige with the typos. You are usually so well edited that it's easy to point it out when they occur. (Part of the pleasure of reading your work involves my not having the urge to restructure your sentences...that and your lovely vocabulary!)

Speaking of vocabulary...Popinjay! Yay!

"the female population responding to his masculinity almost hypnotically" Hehehe! They would wouldn't they...

Another lovely chapter! Hmm...I wonder if there is a breaking point in terms of libido...you know maybe after a few years you sort of forget what it was really like to touch a flesh and blood person other than yourself. Will Lucius be a somewhat awkward lover at first or is having sex like riding a bike?

Popinjay ... so Lucius!

I love a good historical tale as well as a well-built, under-satisfied Lucius looking for a way to be sated.
As always, your tale shall do nicely.

Thanks for sharing, Pitt

Wonderful, more info on where they are which is great. love the use of the word 'popinjay' i never would have thought to apply it to lucius but it fits. I like the fact that your story has fantastic detail put into it and the vocabulary you use is extensive and enjoyable instead of reading the same describing words over and over again. i had a good laugh over hermione trying to fight off the woman trying to come on to her (him?)..lol. keep the chapters coming. Happy Writing!!!

Wow...you are so good! I wish I could captivate an audience as you do. You could probably compete with JK herself! And this storyline is so hypnotizing!

Being in the past must be frustrating! Oh my! How will they get themselves back into the future, providing it's within the story's plot to allow them back? Will they be able to save the world from the sheep? I do hope so! For all his boyish angst I sort of enjoy Harry Potter's character. Ron...I could do without...

Now see that was some great advice about the other window for reviews!!
Well I can tell you how thrilled I was when I discovered the new chapter you've posted, which is by the way keeping me up too late since it's 25 min. past 1 am (I think that's what it's called, can't really figure out the whole am/pm thing. Since we don't use it here in Denmark)

But I love you for making me staying up cos of your great stories!! anyway I'll go back to reading now :D
OH god I love your depiction of Lucius LaBib!! I LIKE being rich *muhaw*
He's so snooty XD just like we love our conceded "hero"
and I keep thinking "Saint Hermione" yeah I'm reading "The Wedding" once again XD
Well hunger certainly got the better of her ;)

I loved it, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter

Yours truly the lurker

another excellent chapter. can't wait to read more.

Clairvoyant? I like that. I have been known to be somewhat good at sniffing out plotlines, since I imagine so many of them myself...but I am freakishly patient so I won't pester you with questions.