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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I could see Hermione being upset about the stink of cheap perfume, but how he didn't guess she figured it out is beyond me. By the way, their scene together in bed was really hot.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um...so this was amazing as always! I can't wait to read more of this. It's so original and different. I hope you update again soon!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wowowow, what a performance! Sweet tantalisation and I could quite fancy Lucius as a redhead, I think. What a shame the cheap tarty perfume gave him away, but nonetheless the cat is squarely among the erotic pigeons now!
That was just...special! I need more, soon.
That was just...special! I need more, soon.
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!
I think they both forgot that in this time period women aren't safe, and they're paying for it!
Oh, I'm on the edge of my seat... how's he going to get her out? Did he remember her wand? What will happen to the 'bad guys'? What are they going to do about the landlady?
Oh! What are they going to do?? What are we (the readers) going to do to fight of the suspense monster you've hatched?!!
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I think they both forgot that in this time period women aren't safe, and they're paying for it!
Oh, I'm on the edge of my seat... how's he going to get her out? Did he remember her wand? What will happen to the 'bad guys'? What are they going to do about the landlady?
Oh! What are they going to do?? What are we (the readers) going to do to fight of the suspense monster you've hatched?!!
11/10
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hasn't figured out why he feels guilty? And I'm glad nothing has happened to Hermione yet, well, other than being kidnapped and sold by someone who didn't have any rights over her. That woman deserved everything Lucius did to her.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 8 - aha! Lucius will not again visit a brothel, now that he knows his dalliance enabled Hermione's kidnapping. what a perfect rescuer - a Death Eater with no scruples about zapping the baddies. here's hoping L&H don't have their "first time" in that sleazy den. thank you for the new chapter!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aahhh....so lucius is feeling guilty for leaving hermione. actually he was already feeling guilty before he noticed she was gone. can't wait to see what he does to make up for it. i love the fact that he is a very possessive man, hermione is his and thats it. although i wonder, is he aware of how possessive he is over her, or is he just reacting to the situation right now? looking forward to more...
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the man of a 1000 faces storming to the rescue, a wee bit jealous, more than a little protective, and he doesn't really understand why yet, does the poor sod. I loved him robbing the Madame and paying her with her own money, too ironic. Now, will Hermione be grateful or gnashing her (his) ...
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope Hermione sees him as hero. LOL. 'Cause the alcohol he had earlier made him less than observant.
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I have finally gotten the time to sit down and read this story and I am in LOVE with it! I'm also in love with that pic of Lucius....I swear my heart stopped for a second there. *Shivers* So hot. Hmmmmmm....sorry, got distracted there for a sec. lol Anyway, this story is really fantastic and I can't wait to read more! I really hope you update again soon!