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I am having a hard time imagining a completely meek Lucius. If any he's a very good actor. Hermione best give him his punishment. He rightly deserves it.

How well expressed all Lucius' frustrations were in that chapter - it almost seemed that he had no reasonable alternative to giving Hermione a good thrashing, and the act itself was supremely satisfying for the reader as well as the man in question.

And now Hermione has him entirely at her mercy...oh, something tells me that tempering justice with mercy might not be a Gryffindor trait (it certainly isn't a Slytherin one). Go, Hermione, go! Heh.

Fun, fun, fun!

Hee. As much as I like that idea, I would rather Hermione leave him hanging for a while.

This may be my Lynchburg lemonade talking, but Lucius is damn lucky little Hermione isn't a fangirl at this point. He'd be in for way more than a tanning of his pureblooded posterior!!!!! Slow torturous (damn, no more Jack Daniels when reviewing -- I can't even tell if I spelled that properly!) tantalizing teasing -- he'd be begging for more than a hand on his bottom.

Whoops, damn, I said that out loud, didn't I? Shoot. Sorry. How about: GO Hermione, it's payback time?!?

Yay LaBib, another wonderful chapter! I was laughing when Lucius yanked Hermione out of her hiding spot and proceeded to spank her silly. Eeeeek! What a way to way to wake up. You can tell though it was wonderfully satisfying to Lucius. I think Hermione rather enjoyed it too, if her damp knickers have anything to say.

Now Hermione has Lucius at her mercy, tied to the bed, and is about to give him some payback. I

Okay, Enquiring Minds must know: Is Lucius going to teach Hermione the Death Eater wisp o' smoke apparation thing? Or something better?!?

I'd like a little more Know-it-all expounding on what Hermione expects from her escort ... and how our proper aristocrat should treat a lady.

And, just what other tidbits of Death Eater trivia are we going to be privvy to, eh?

Well, now, Hermione realizes Lucius is horny, and she's obviously horny. Can mutual satisfaction be far away? And a delicious little slice of GREEN apple pie for Miss Hermione as well. Not wanting to share a blond Lucius ...

That wasn't a very nice place to leave a reader hanging there ... an angry, horny Lucius. My dreams will be disturbed for days, at least until you update, dear!

Chapter 11

Hmm I wonder if Lucius' assumption that the Forbidden Forest is correct. Is it really the same as it is in his memory...

ch 9-11 - I love the way you keep Lucius as Lucius, rather than making him into a cupcake. I hope Hermione confronts him about the whore's "perfume" she smelled on him, as I think he'll be tickled that she was upset about it. Glad he was able to send the kiddies back home, and with enough money to have a small start on a new life. It was great for you to weave his Death Eater experience into his use of the Forbidden Forest. I'm still waiting for him to realize that Malfoy Manor is inhabited by family. Thanks for the new chapters! BTW, where in California are you? I'm in Bay Area.

Nooooo..... oh, you are too cruel! But such a good writer!

So uh....you're gonna update soon and it's going to be positively brillant, just like everything else that's been in this story, right?

Yeah, I knew you were.