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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"This was a man in his absolute prime, a fully grown, fully developed male with a masculine package that promised untold delights to any female lucky enough to be his choice." hihihi

Sweet Merlin....what a vision!!!!
*giggles like a fool*
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write Lucius. I really do. He
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you. That was just too... Lucius and his hand. um... I think I better not say anymore. I hope Hermione gets some of that goodness later. Great job.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lurker came out of the shadows =P

well i dont know i always read the updates of this fic but i never comment :P

but i gotta tell you i like it, the way u describe their situations and how they behave >:] specially Lucius =)

and well cant to wait to read more and to see Lucius n Hermione finally getting some of their own ;)

schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness honey. That was so HOT!! Honestly, I just wanted to reach out and do a little caressing there. lol Really really great update hon, I can't wait for more...PLEASE update again soon!!
person jw
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 12 - phew, I'm glad she didn't try to leave and go it alone. she really does need to thank him a bit more for what he's done for her; this is an awfully big bind they're in, and he has been the one to get rid of the dead bodies and thugs, and obtain money. I'm curious as to how Lucius will advance their relationship, although I don't think she is angry enough to give him any really heavy whacks on his bum. and I know that you'll surprise us all, as you do in each chapter! thanks for updating.
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I think I have now read (or have downloaded to read) every story you have posted.
Favorite author award :P, cant wait to see how the story flows.
One minor point though, when Lucius is interrogating the innkeeper, he Accio's the house deed, is the deed magical? I was under the impression that only items from the magic world or with innate magic would respond to the Accio command.(darn, more rereading to check...Fun!)
Please correct me if I am wrong, or you could just say since its AU that changed :)
Cumpulsive
person Damiana
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12

A spanking!!! No wait...Oh...How does one name this?

Hmm...It's as though Lucius flagelates himself mentally...Still, Hermione will be the one witha sore backside (and it doesn't seem as though she's enjoying herself).
Hmm maybe she did enjoy it a little...

Hehehe. "At first I was going to truss you up like a Christmas goose" He would have deserved it too!

He wasn't really counting when he was thrashing her so, Lucius may be surprised at the number of hits he'll be getting! Erm. You know where I stand on this one. Spankings all around! Will she be leaving him all tied up for it?
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was going to name myself belle from beauty and the beast (she always was my facourite) but I'm already signed in. Loved it as usual. Personally though I think Hermione should use some of her cunning and smarts she's renound for and instead of spanking him then she should either
A) trade it for a favour
B) Be able to use it at a later time, the poor girl is probably dead tired and exhausted in all forms by this point.
Not only would it open lucius' eyes a bit more for her potential as other than a person from his time and sex object but more of an equal as it shows a slytherin aspect. Your chice though, keep it up!
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I hope Hermione goes through with it. Hopefully she'll enjoy the power and regain some trust in Lucius. Of course if just the thought of it is turning Lucius on, he won't be able to hide his reaction like Hermione could. Damn, it's gonna be good. I love it!