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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I laughed at the 'duck' moment too, gotta love dyslexia - fiction is never boring when I have 'one of those days'. *giggles*
Tampons! You know your bloke loves you when he goes on a "sanatory run" to the shops! My other half did that for me, then phoned me from the supermarket uttlery baffled by the sheer choice of product! I told him to get the ones in the green box - evidently there were six companies with green packaging! Bless him! lol. Though, that time of the month isn't going to be pretty for Hermione now; even my Gran didn't have such "modern wonders" when she was a teen! It was a folded towel-thingy on a sort of looped system on a belt at the waist! Unless Hermione is the kinda prepared girl with one in her pocket for emergencies or can transfigure something, she's in for a bit of a learning curve!
She could always tame his libido with a cock ring that he can't magic off... he might learn a lesson then? *evil laugh: muhahahahahaaaaaa*
The dress Hermione is wearing reminds me of the style I used to wear to school in Summer! But mine was blue and white. She screams innocence - and that's probably even more of a turn-on for Lucius. She's turning him on and not even realising - an aphrodisiac all of its own!
Those 'take me, take me' bodily urges are a pain! They normally occur right when you don't want them to! Like in restaurants during candlelit dinners for 2. Poor Hermione... she's got no chance.
You know, Lucius's comment about hair is really intriguing. I also have hair that quite simply WON'T curl - even the best tong-created curls drop out after an hour. And I can't be bothered with a perm. Yet, my other half absoulutely goes NUTS for me with even kinky hair, and the one time I managed to get the curls to stay in (with the help of a whole can of hair spray) he went WILD. I think you have a point with that... *ponders*
Lucius! Good grief! you can have sex and your arse not be touched! What's wrong with face to face whilst laying on one side? It's the most sensual position as you can look into each other's eyes... though is that too close for them?
10/10
Tampons! You know your bloke loves you when he goes on a "sanatory run" to the shops! My other half did that for me, then phoned me from the supermarket uttlery baffled by the sheer choice of product! I told him to get the ones in the green box - evidently there were six companies with green packaging! Bless him! lol. Though, that time of the month isn't going to be pretty for Hermione now; even my Gran didn't have such "modern wonders" when she was a teen! It was a folded towel-thingy on a sort of looped system on a belt at the waist! Unless Hermione is the kinda prepared girl with one in her pocket for emergencies or can transfigure something, she's in for a bit of a learning curve!
She could always tame his libido with a cock ring that he can't magic off... he might learn a lesson then? *evil laugh: muhahahahahaaaaaa*
The dress Hermione is wearing reminds me of the style I used to wear to school in Summer! But mine was blue and white. She screams innocence - and that's probably even more of a turn-on for Lucius. She's turning him on and not even realising - an aphrodisiac all of its own!
Those 'take me, take me' bodily urges are a pain! They normally occur right when you don't want them to! Like in restaurants during candlelit dinners for 2. Poor Hermione... she's got no chance.
You know, Lucius's comment about hair is really intriguing. I also have hair that quite simply WON'T curl - even the best tong-created curls drop out after an hour. And I can't be bothered with a perm. Yet, my other half absoulutely goes NUTS for me with even kinky hair, and the one time I managed to get the curls to stay in (with the help of a whole can of hair spray) he went WILD. I think you have a point with that... *ponders*
Lucius! Good grief! you can have sex and your arse not be touched! What's wrong with face to face whilst laying on one side? It's the most sensual position as you can look into each other's eyes... though is that too close for them?
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was quite suspenseful for a spanking scene. The fact that Hermione's having a good think about whether she could carry out the task turned out to be mental torture for Lucius was very amusing. Sending her off to the bath afterwards for a soak was good thinking. You turned Lucius's wank almost into a religious experience you wrote it so well and he had a bloody good time with his must needed release.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've just started reading the fic and I have fallen in love with it as I have with all your others!
Chapter 13 (and previous chapters)
"scrambled eggs" yep, definitely got a giggle out of that! Even tied up, Lucius can't be meek or submissive, oh well what can you do?
Spanking Lucius... drool
I really want Hermione to hurry up and realise how shaggable Lucius is and give into the desire... I guess it's because she was so screwed over by Ron and that other one (his name's not important enough for me to remember). Arseholes. Oh and not to mention that evil old biddy and those thugs forcing Hermione into prostitution for their own selfish desires - if that wasn't enough to mess her up then I don't know what is...
Maybe Lucy will help to address those confidence issues of hers...
Did Hermione manage to find a family to insinuate themselves into before her abduction?
Will Lucius be using his actual surname because it might be a little weird if he were to go back into the magical world and meet the Malfoys of that time? Or maybe the Malfoys were still in France during the 1800s??
I don't think Lucius could honestly be expected not to cheat and steal to get money (and property) especially in their position... totally on his side and not any of those unsavoury characters he took from - they certainly wont be needing it now they're running about the Forbidden Forest.
I will be waiting patiently for your next update...
Rini
Chapter 13 (and previous chapters)
"scrambled eggs" yep, definitely got a giggle out of that! Even tied up, Lucius can't be meek or submissive, oh well what can you do?
Spanking Lucius... drool
I really want Hermione to hurry up and realise how shaggable Lucius is and give into the desire... I guess it's because she was so screwed over by Ron and that other one (his name's not important enough for me to remember). Arseholes. Oh and not to mention that evil old biddy and those thugs forcing Hermione into prostitution for their own selfish desires - if that wasn't enough to mess her up then I don't know what is...
Maybe Lucy will help to address those confidence issues of hers...
Did Hermione manage to find a family to insinuate themselves into before her abduction?
Will Lucius be using his actual surname because it might be a little weird if he were to go back into the magical world and meet the Malfoys of that time? Or maybe the Malfoys were still in France during the 1800s??
I don't think Lucius could honestly be expected not to cheat and steal to get money (and property) especially in their position... totally on his side and not any of those unsavoury characters he took from - they certainly wont be needing it now they're running about the Forbidden Forest.
I will be waiting patiently for your next update...
Rini
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I qualify as a lurker simple because I wait until I read the last chapter available before I review. I like this story. It's a fresh take on things. I would also like to say that I demand more chapters and soon. *nods* Okay so ... can I please have more chapters??? I'm not really good at demanding things. I just can't wait for Hermione to come to her senses and realize that Lucious Malfoy is a georgeous hunk of man and should be slept with at all costs. Plus it wouldn't hurt Lucious any if he told Hermione he wanted to be with her forever. Then she might be a little more receptive to his attention. Have you ever just wanted to jump into a story and slap some sense into the characters. *shakes head* Then again you are the author you could slap sense into them but, it's better if you don't.
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw LaBib, I myself would love to be the one tied. Of course you probably already guessed that, simply from my writing. lol But I must say, hot damn, what you just wrote is so frickin
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Falls - it is a new term for me. It makes sense thanks for adding to my vocab. Your writing is like a present waiting to be consumed. I always to a quite time of the day to savor it.
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like that she kind of dragged it out. But yeah, I think he got what he wanted. And she is definitely hooked now. Not necessarily on the caning, but on him. That ass sounded like a piece of art.
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What number am I on? 12?
skin flautist! *snort* Don't want a sax player then? I can audition twice! And the other members of the orchestra can get in line behind meeeeeeeee!
*right, sensible hat on*
Firstly, oh your word usage makes me shudder! LITERALLY! I quite simply ADORE a good vocabulary! You should give us a word-in-a-chapter with a definition at the end, then we can advance our vocab with you! Learn as you have fun and-all-that-jazz!
His mind is running at a mile-a-minute and it's gone of on a tangent and not come back! He's got the wrong end of the stick completely! (Typical bloke!)
It isn't as if this spanking is a sexual game with rules and codes of conduct - this is pure brutalisation and Hermione is terrified! I know his psychological state at that precise moment isn't brilliant; but what he's doing is degrading and uncalled for! He needs Hermione to trust him, not be frightened of him! The tentative friendship they had has just been thrashed away!
I have a sinking feeling that Hermione getting her own back won't involve the fear that Lucius bestowed on her! He's going to enjoy it, and not experience what she has just been through! I'd have cut his hair - messing with his looks would hurt more than smacking his arse!
Hermione stood by the bed watching Lucius
skin flautist! *snort* Don't want a sax player then? I can audition twice! And the other members of the orchestra can get in line behind meeeeeeeee!
*right, sensible hat on*
Firstly, oh your word usage makes me shudder! LITERALLY! I quite simply ADORE a good vocabulary! You should give us a word-in-a-chapter with a definition at the end, then we can advance our vocab with you! Learn as you have fun and-all-that-jazz!
His mind is running at a mile-a-minute and it's gone of on a tangent and not come back! He's got the wrong end of the stick completely! (Typical bloke!)
It isn't as if this spanking is a sexual game with rules and codes of conduct - this is pure brutalisation and Hermione is terrified! I know his psychological state at that precise moment isn't brilliant; but what he's doing is degrading and uncalled for! He needs Hermione to trust him, not be frightened of him! The tentative friendship they had has just been thrashed away!
I have a sinking feeling that Hermione getting her own back won't involve the fear that Lucius bestowed on her! He's going to enjoy it, and not experience what she has just been through! I'd have cut his hair - messing with his looks would hurt more than smacking his arse!
Hermione stood by the bed watching Lucius
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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione, Gryffindor honesty to a fault!
16 for twelve, I like her reasoning!
*snort* scrambled eggs! lol! (which is amusing, seeing as the egg is a female thing!)
She had a ruthless Death Eater tied spread-eagled facedown on her bed and her most pressing problem was how to get his pants off his derriere. well, what other kind of problem are you going to have? Silly Hermione.
Hermione frowned, knowing there was a flaw in his answer somewhere, but she was too interested in delving under his hips again to care. he can't get hard THAT quick, luv, it takes a minute or two to get the blood filling all those little tubes. She wasn't a studier of the sex organs, I see. lol.
one of those elegant, attenuated, swanlike creatures who would be an ornament to his name. Hermione as a major issue with self confidene! She is as elegant as graceful as any other woman! She's no ugly duckling either! I don't think she'd want to be an ornament for him! Rather an equal. She needs him to give her a confidence boost!
He wanted those sixteen swats, a good wank, and then he wanted to sleep for ten hours. In that order. yep, sod all the pureblood crap and manners, this bloke needs some "alone time". lol.
My other half is a bottom worshiper, but goodness knows why he'd worship mine! lol! Though, I'd worship Lucius's arse, and ANYTHING else on that body!
16 for twelve, I like her reasoning!
*snort* scrambled eggs! lol! (which is amusing, seeing as the egg is a female thing!)
She had a ruthless Death Eater tied spread-eagled facedown on her bed and her most pressing problem was how to get his pants off his derriere. well, what other kind of problem are you going to have? Silly Hermione.
Hermione frowned, knowing there was a flaw in his answer somewhere, but she was too interested in delving under his hips again to care. he can't get hard THAT quick, luv, it takes a minute or two to get the blood filling all those little tubes. She wasn't a studier of the sex organs, I see. lol.
one of those elegant, attenuated, swanlike creatures who would be an ornament to his name. Hermione as a major issue with self confidene! She is as elegant as graceful as any other woman! She's no ugly duckling either! I don't think she'd want to be an ornament for him! Rather an equal. She needs him to give her a confidence boost!
He wanted those sixteen swats, a good wank, and then he wanted to sleep for ten hours. In that order. yep, sod all the pureblood crap and manners, this bloke needs some "alone time". lol.
My other half is a bottom worshiper, but goodness knows why he'd worship mine! lol! Though, I'd worship Lucius's arse, and ANYTHING else on that body!