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AAAAAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH ... so close, so close, so close!

And yet so far.

I'll be checking back daily now! DAILY I said. :)

Chapter 14

Have you ever read or seen Richard III? (Shakespeare's of course...)

Lucius' seduction of Hermione kinda put me in mind of the scene where Richard seduces Anne over the body of the murdered king. Obviously Lucius isn't deformed and Hermione is not grieving over the murders of two people she cared about... Erm. Anyways. Richard just kind of turns a situation in which she claims to hate him and wishes him dead and essentially gets her to accept his ring and eventually his bed. It's strange and interesting...

Right.

I'll take off my literature hat now. Good chapter LaBib (as always)!

I just want you to know that my heart was beating a mile a second while I read that. Good grief....Lucius has got me seduced! lol Looks like Hermione is going to get to do all the caressing that I'm dying to do eh? Lucky bitch...lol! Seriously great update. I also want you to know that I managed to frighten my cat by letting out a happily surprised squeak at seeing an update (I refuse to call it squealing...I have to maintain some sort of dignity....). Did you know that cats are actually capable of the ultimate death glare? Anyway, as always I loved it and I can't wait for more!

I was like.. Are they gonna do it? Are they gonna do it? Are they gonna do it? Darn it all.... Their not gonna. At least not this chapter. Their magic you think they could use a basic healing charm or something GAH! At least Hermione is coming around. *waits impatiently as always for the next wonderful chapter*

Ten Years! TEN YEARS!! Oh, please be a kind author and let Hermione get some relief in the next chapter. I loved how Hermione was convinced. Lucius is such a Slytherin, an Oh So Sexy Slytherin.

*Waves back enthusiastically*

Blast! Of course it would be their sore bums that prevent them from having sex

Oooh. Very cool, I like the way that logic worked on her. Well, it is Hermione. And Lucius certainly isn't an idiot, but I think the idea of something enticing him away from Hermione may be fleeting, or he would not like the results.

ch 13 -14 - Hermione should know better than to expect that she can walk unescorted; she needs him or a maid with her. hmm, perhaps he can take her to the bordello, and the "workers" can tell her how much better Lucius is than their old "employer." perhaps he is shielding her from too much knowledge, like the children he freed from the brothel. good thing he talked bluntly with her about the damage those two blokes did to her; ten years of self-hatred was not healthy for her. I'm very much looking forward to reading about your Regency version of Diagon Alley. thanks for the new chapters!

Reviewing as promised.

Man, this is intense. I can't say I've read anything else like it. Loves it.

Are you aware I live in New Zealand? There's about 5 sheep to every human being in this country. I must say that thought now makes me a tad nervous. LOL.

Looking forward to seeing what's beyond the veil.

oooh, i smell lemons ahead!! laughed out loud at the line "Lucius was watching her like a hippogriff eyeing a very tasty ferret" great reference there. i am thoroughly enjoying this story and can't wait for more!!