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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

person Anon
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh and adding to above, I think that "Lucius' endowments" should just be "Lucius' endowment" because you're just talking about his penis and comparing it to Ron's and Roger's right?
person Rini
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Crap! forgot to leave my name with the anon one above... am such an idiot... well now you know it was me. and you have two extra reviews!!!
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Labib! I'm all caught up now. Bring on the smut.

I can't believe you turned Lucius into a near Weasley. (shakes head)

Oh yes, and the spanking of that toned, dimply ass was a nice touch. Very nice, indeed.

I guess we all knew Hermione would give in. What was she doing in that bath while Lucius was getting up close and personal with the wallpaper?
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhh :O

interesting devolpment (:

so know they're on terms :O

hehe cant wait to read more n___n
person Jesse
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good job on this! I like the story. Can't wait for more. and don't you love Lucius in period clothes!?!?! YUMMY!!
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Devious Lucius using a little of reverse psychology on Hermione to get her into his bed. LOL. "What works, do" I can see being Lucius' mantra. I didn't there was a "Diagon Alley." I am confused.
person maddie50
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So much for Lucius's quick escape with a raging hard on and a preoccupied Hermione. What was he thinking? Oh, yeah. Never mind. It is pretty funny that they both have sore asses so no one can be bottom. Now that the negotiations are out of the way, I think it is smart of Hermione to go with Lucius on his errands. He is too randy to let loose.
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Go Lucius! He cut right to the quick of Hermione's vulnerabilities there, didn't he? But he's quite right - two losers a decade ago should not stop any woman shagging Mr Malfoy! It's a criminal waste of opportunity! He crept right up and moved in for the kill; lovely to behold.

Incidentally, it's a pity Lucius and Hermione don't have access to the internet. I bet they'd find some advice on post-thrashing sex positions ;).

How the hell are they going to wait two days or more!?! They need some kind of potion, I reckon.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another ace chapter. Ooh that tension between the two of them is just so... yum! I was wondering how the mechanics of the situation were gonna happen even as I was drooling at the thought of Lucius standing there looking so scrumptious.

God, I hope they find Diagon Alley easily cos that candlelit meal is gonna be good.

btw, thanks for that pic. I can just see Lucius decked out in all that, his pants tight across that gorgeous bum... and other areas! hmm, does drool make your computer malfunction? better go clean that up and bide my time till the next chapter.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw LaBib, this was another lovely chapter! Yay! I love this story so much. You just don