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for Beyond the Veil -- COMPLETE

by LaBibliographe

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I see about this lovely story that hasn
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOH I was able to read five more chapters!! And they were very interesting chapters indeed. I do admit I love how your Lucius enjoys his spankings, still wiping up the drool! I do say he went a little wild on Hermione but she didn't seem to mind when the tables were turned. Interesting that when they entered the Magical World that the shopkeeper knew who they were, it will be interesting to see if the "rightful" Malfoys show up or did some how when they entered this time line did they become those people. I can't wait to read more!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright as you can see I can't stop reading this story, I am now up to chapter 18 and I must say that I am very much hooked, it is going to be hard not to continue reading this but I must stop to eat dinner and spend some time with my husband *wink wink*. I am wondering what their little trip through time has impacted the future, if they do return what will be different and what will be the same or will nothing change. Well until tomorrow (hopefully).
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww. They're so disgustingly, pervily cute. I enjoyed the way you tied up all the loose ends, even giving a nod to Margaret the embroidery-talented brothel employee. Overall, just a really warm and fuzzy way to end things. It's been a journey, but always a worthwhile one! :)

I watched the first few episodes of season 3 of Brotherhood and am completely hooked. The soft porn is just fine with me, lol. Mm mmm mmm. I will probably be requesting the DVDs for my birthday. :D

Thanks for a wonderful story and I look forward to your next great tale.
person sinbad
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed your story, an excellent job to be sure. Also, I'm looking forward to your next work. See you next posting.
person Tenar10r
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending! I loved every second of this story so so so much. Thank you for sharing and I am eagerly awaiting your next one!
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story as always. I always enjoy your stories. They're so well written and flow so well from beginning to end. I can't wait for your next story. ^o^
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!!!! The ending made me feel all warm and cozy inside. The explanations on the kids and how everything turned out was fantastic. You tied up every loose end.

I was wondering what would happen to Filch in this story. I always felt so bad for him. I always thought if he hadn't been so mistreated he would have been a better person. And who would have thought that gievn the right circumstances in a story...that I'd be right?

Oooh...I can't wait until you post your new story. I know you were reading my Draco/Hermione story...did you like it? You haven't made any comments as of late. I...*blush* I've gotten a spark for a Lucius/Hermione story...I think I'll try and write this one completely before I post it, as I'm still working on yet another Draco/Hermione. Well, I look forward to any other works you may have for us in the future, and I hope your muse dances quickly!

~DragonFyre
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. I couldn't imagine that many children, but then again, my first one is knocking me on my butt. Thanks for the wonderful story, and I am looking forward to your next one.