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This is amazing! Absolutely entertaining and very well written. :D :D

I absolutely love this!! Please continue it!

Wow, great story...when will the next chapters be posted?? Keep up the good work. Barbara

Hi Waauw I reeeeaaally like your story :) I hope it continues.
Maybe you can leave the sex part for after the completion card :) then they have to really choose to do it, instead of blaming it on the game...

other things you could make them do:
- let them undress eachother in a public place (only it's not real but it looks real). For example: they're at dinner in the hall and they have the urge to undress eachother in front of everyone they know. Imagine the reactions :) ofcourse the surroundings are not really there, it's in their minds but it all looks real.
- make them go solo while the other watches
- let Draco give Hermione a massage
- let them play with body paint (they can write stuff they think about the other on the others body.. fluffy stuff :))
- they can read naughty stories to eachother
- play hide and seek :)
- give Hermione a vibrating egg and Draco the remote control (they used this in a movie I saw, very funny)

I just found this story yesterday and I am absolutely IN LOVE with this. I love how original it is, I absolutely love how you are keeping them both in character. I HATE it when people make Draco all mushy towards Hermione or vice versa so fast cause it just isnt like that. These two hate each other so for authors to write them in love so fast just doesnt work. Even though they are playing the card game and they are drawn to one another because of that you still have moments where they remind themselves that they hate each other but at the sametime having them feel something for one another. Its like your staying true to the characters but having them feel something for each other in a brillant and original way. I just hate that I found the story so soon cause you're only up to chapter 7, I believe, and now I have to wait for chapters to be posted instead of just reading the whole story straight through. AMAZING JOB so far!!! Cant wait for your next update!!!!

I Love This Story Its Bloody Briliant an idea for a future chapter is the feather that she saw in his trunk could have a spell put on it to where whenever it touches his or her skin it glows and sends a wave of pleasure throughout their body and one of them could be tied up. Please update soon!

Wow, great story. I can't wait for the rest...

You asked for ideas, so here are some:
- feathers & tickling
- massage with oil
- feeding each other
- make Draco touch Hermione's kitty ears and tail seductively (I'm assuming they're magical enhancements and not just part of the outfit?)
- using wands on each other to create warm and hot spots, then cold spots (changing temperatures)
- oral for Hermione from Draco (he got his, now it's her turn)
- sex, sex and more sex - use the Karma Sutra for some really interesting positions and consider daring places (in front of a mirror, in front of a big window, outside on the grass, in a bathtub, etc.) and magical kink (transfiguring themselves into other people for role-play)
- toys like beads and such (but only after they have sex, since I'm assuming she's a virgin and it would really be a bad way to lose it to a toy, if you catch my meaning)

And don't forget to get rid of the kitty suit somewhere along the line. Cute, but will be a hinderance when it's time to get down for fun.

Can I just say... that DARN, your chapters are too short, and you make me hot! And now I want to know where I can get those cards and a certain hot blond Slytherin to satisfy this hunger.

Whoa...long time no see! I almost thought you abandoned it...anyway, well done! Can't wait for the next chapie :D