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for 52 Ways to Please Your Partner

by emisloser

person mhaj78
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! what a great surprise to find another chap...and an excellently steamy shower scene at that!! VERY well done. :) looking forward to the next!!
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please make the chapters longer!!!! This story rocks!
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
K; well, I love showering with a man!!!! That was hot. I think what I'd like to see next, is mutual masturbation. To ease the tension?? How bout it??
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah I love it!
Nice work!
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely, Amazingly, delicious!
After reading the first 2 chapters, I came across (via Ann Summer's website) sexual cards: 52 Sexual Positions and I was totally reminded of your story!!
person Tootsie
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! It make me hot! I want to scream!!!!. I will waiti you up date. Cheer! (^0^)
person GMW
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Here are a few ideas...
One of them can tie up the other
Dirty Talk
Massage
Hand jobs (either individually or together)
Oral (either individually or 69)
Spanking
Her on top
Against the wall
Bent over

(I'm sure you can find plenty of ideas online)

Waiting for updates...
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude; your story is *HAWT!!!!* More?? Please??
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting, very funny, cant wait to see what happens next!! keep it coming.. i want to know how it ends!!
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is great and totally creative... as for an idea for a card ice cubes are always fun!!!