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This is a fun idea. I agree with Utopia about the sex coming after the game. It sounds like they are possibly developing feelings (even if it is only lust) and that it is not just the game. Also, I liked Phoenix's idea of painting each other. I definitely think Draco needs to pull a card that has him satisfying Hermione (a nice massage?). Good luck with the writing!

oh i missed you so much!

OH MY FREAKING GOSH. I will wait forever if it means we get chapters like those!! Okay, I am totally in love with this story--and I loved the character development that's taking place in the midst of this...it's so perfect, so relevant, so appropriate, and very well-written!! Are you still looking for chap ideas? If so, some things you might consider are: reverse bondage with DM having control over HG, striptease, more costume changes--a maid, naughty schoolgirl, nurse??, DM doing her breasts/getting off in her mouth, full body oiled massage, anal (did you do that one already? I can't remember), something with a bit of violence--biting, hair pulling, etc., maybe a bit of exhibitionism or voyeurism?

Whatever you decide, you're rocking my world with this--keep up the amazingly great work!!

I must admit i do love the idea behind this story. It is original and different which is great for a genre such as this one. I am thorouly enjoying the story and can't wait to see what you come up with in the future. I do hope you take it very close to 52 haha. should you need any ideas let me know. Thanks to 3 years of living at uni us girls one night did up a little list of any way to please someone, similar to your 52 list... I do still have it so if you get stuck i can probably help you out with a few ideas (te he he) Congratulations on a good story that you are writing well. Looking foward to more and hopefully life wont get too much in the way before the next chapter comes out!!!!
Sam

when is the next chapter coming out?i got another idea,hide and seek game,or chase and run game.. draco hide hermione seek,or draco chase,hermione run..it is up to u how to make it far more interesting than a normal game.

when is the next chapter coming out?i got another idea,hide and seek game,or chase and run game.. draco hide hermione seek,or draco chase,hermione run..it is up to u how to make it far more interesting than a normal game.

Please hurry and update!! It is a good story - keep it going!

lol I like this story. You actually going to write 52 chapters for it? Either way please continue, it's a rather risqu

please please please add a new chapter.... pretty please.

You really must keep this going, Im very excited and interested in this story, and that doesnt happen often!!!!