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UPDATE!!! RIGHT!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*pouts* pretty please???

Two words: In public

7 & 8 were worth the wait! But hopefully 9 won't take as long : ) I love that Draco had a "pleasure box" hidden away. Hopefully that peacock feather comes into play on a future card??

I think this story is nicely developed with very good pacing. I like the way Draco has shifted from loathing the idea of touching a "mudblood" to deciding he might as well enjoy rolling in the mud to reluctantly realizing that Hermione is, in fact, a very attractive witch to developing his own hunger for her which, though instigated by the game seems to be independent from it. I like it because the change was a gradual, believable evolution even though it takes place in such a short time frame. You'd said earlier that you weren't going to do all 52 cards, and I think that's a great idea. Also, it looks like neither of them gets to "finish" until the "completion" card is drawn and Draco, at least, is already nearly in pain he's so turned on. So, yeah, have pity on them (and on us!) and let them draw that card soon. Not too soon, mind. Hermione is already wishing she could keep going with the game forever, and we really can't blame her. Now, you've dropped a couple of hintsthat I, for one, would like to see further explored: 1) Hermione's curiosity about the peacock feather, 2) Draco's need to be in control, and 3) that bad kitty costume Hermione is wearing. I also note that several people have mentioned they'd like to see someone get a massage with either scented oils or with stimulating oils, and I'm all for that, too. I am also hoping that both parties change their mind about the Oblviation pact. I'd much rather see them decide, once things end, that what they really want to do is...play another game of cards. *G* Thanks for writing this very entertaining fic.

OMG wat a gd fic! Bravo! Keep updating please!!!
V xxx

This story is so much fun! The plot *hee* is very entertaining and I cannot wait for another update.

MISSED YOU! MISSED YOU! MISSED YOU! Thanks for the double post, sooooo friggin sexy! Loved Draco's admission, gushy, but not entirely unrealistic! Ummmm, an idea, what about taking the action outside of the common room, where Draco has to *ahem* "orally please" Hermione at his place at the Slytherin table in the Great Hall! *swoon* the possibilities! Or, he can work his way teasing her starting with the Hufflepuff table, Ravenclaw, Gryffindor, and THEN end with the "feast" at the Slytherin table!

hello karma sutra, lets see how flexible hermione is? stimulation oils, how much control does the young malfoy have with hermione's talented fingers? finger painting hell that takes two.

thank you thank you thank you! I have been waiting FOREVER, it seems! I really loved these two chapters. I really like how you make Hermione a little kinky, Draco a little sweeter. Once again, my heart was pounding right along with your characters. Great Job! Let's not wait so long to post again, though, okay?

Can't say a word, God you make me HOT!! -- need a cool shower NOW!!