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hot hot hot...how about a little mutual oral pleasure for both of them...and who doesn't like a dom draco?

Oh, and there's alwasy toys.....

OK - PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE update soon. Your fans are dying for some more!!! I check back almost everyday hoping to find more.

wow that was really good i like a like smut every now and then, this story is amazong and i cant wait to see whats next to come! update soon

HOLY MOTHER OF HIPPOGRIFFS this fucking story is INSANE. Talk about originality and smut, I was utterly blown away senseless when I read these first 8 chapters, OMG I love the ideas of the cards and how the story went straight into it, I love the ideas for cards especially that one where mione was covered in sweets, sigh. I almost fell off my bed when I started to read this and it hands down is the most unique smutty and entertaining storyline I have come across thus far. You have to keep up the brilliant work and finish this story cuz if dont I will personally hunt u down and tar and feather u. And as for ideas for cards; As I am truly feeling sorry for malfoy that he cant find release and his painful problem, maybe Hermione should draw a card giving her the option to have the power over her or her partner's RELEASE but it is solely her desicion, so she could either find pleasure herself or aid malfoy in an orgasm. Where she willingly aids malfoy in finding release. I dont know how hott this idea is to u but I would be so fangirl happy if u did use it. If I come up with anymore ideas I will send them your way, cause I love this story to much, Oh and I love the kitty costume and really hope they dont oblivate themselves afterwards, oh and love the mushy stuff at the end of the last chapter it was good and it fits. Please, Please update soon.

cant wait for more of this =D

Hey,

I seriously think you NEED to update (whenever you can).

First, let me say that I love the gushiness. I also love the internal struggle to get there with these two, but I love getting there. That said...WOW! What a hot, hot story. I know you don't plan on writing 52 chapters, but I think if you did, it would never get boring. You've written every kiss and moment to stand out from the previous ones. Kudos on that! I haven't read all the reviews yet, so not sure what others have suggested, so here are some of mine (public places, outdoors, skinny dipping and other watery fun, having them wank while the other watches (voyrerism/exhibitionism)...okay that's all I've got at the moment. I'm planning on putting all of those in my story, but I like reading about them and I'd love to see what you do with them. They are going to die of anticipation soon. I wonder if after they "complete" their little game this evening, if Draco will pull the next card even if he doesn't have to, to start a new game and keep it going with her. Anyway, great job! Lots of fun and well written!

Please don't tell me that you've given up the story...

Hope that you still plan on finishing this story. I check everyday for updates. Keep up the great work!