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for An Alchemical Discontent

by Lomonaaeren

person TimeFlys
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O-Dear! A death by the 'desire potion'? This is going to get messie, isn't it? And we still need to fix the Daphne thing. Draco and Hermione work really well as a team. Hopefully we'll get to see them team up and go after Harry about his own potion. lol- now that will be a sight! On a side note: A few chapters ago Draco said that he preferred to be chased after. Do you seeing it going that way? Because right now it looks like Draco is going to have to be the one doing the chasing. I don't think Harry is ready for that- and honestly after the thing with Ginny, I think it might be better for him to relinquish control to someone else. (Or just for a while, anyway.)

Either way I can't wait till the next chapter! And thank you for the prompt updates.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm....Draco has many enemies...all of them want to see him fail and see Harry away from him. Well....I won't stand for it!! They shall never seperate them! Well that was an enlightening chapter. thankies!
person Moyima
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Harry and Draco circling each other like this is driving me crazy!!! Fantastic chapters! I cant' wait to see two two of them zero in on each other! And Daphne-- ARGH!!!! Keep it up!
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6! Well the lovely Ms Nott is paid off. But does Draco know how long he's going to be in service to Daphne?
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Ginny. I don't know what she was trying to do but it must have hurt her to see Harry stand up against her. But it makes me glad tht Harry will stand up for Draco. When will Harry find out about Daphne? Will Draco explain to him or leave him feeling guilty for intruding? Can't wait for more!
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5! Draco has no clue what Daphne did? Holy moly! Now that's brave!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4! Hermione showed him!!! Oh he didn't know what hit him!!! Almost feel sorry for ole Diggory!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is cute...being all flrity with Draco! Will this end up being a threesome fic...like with Hermione included? I was just wondering...So....Diggory...he is certainly pushing it isnt he? Well now he knows not to mess with the....i guess NEW trio. Well done!
person graballz
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AUGH! Another GREAT chapter!!! GRRRRRRRR you tease me with the whole Draco/Daphne thing and then follow Harry instead of Draco!!!!

*whimper* Less than sympathetic???? OH NO! Now I'm even more worried about Draco!!! *crosses fingers* Harry will come around...he won't leave Draco vulnerable and by himself...it'll all be okay...it'll work out...

But I'm still on pins and needles waiting for it to!!!!!! Harry just misunderstands, right? Draco tries to play it off and salvage some pride and dignity in front of Harry and Harry gets the wrong idea...right? Once he realizes that Draco's doing it against his will, he'll think of some way to help him, right?!?!??!! *hope hope hope*

LOL Another awesome chapter!!! And now I can't WAIT for Chapter 4!!!! I STILL WANT DETAILS ON DRACO/DAPHNE!!! I have to know EXACTLY what she's doing to my blonde baby so that I can kill her later!!!