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for An Alchemical Discontent

by Lomonaaeren

schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8! Delores should have been locked up anyway! Daphne made him allergic to milk? Oh this is bad! Draco you idiot!!!
person Anon
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah i see i forgot that. thanks.

what the hell did daphne do to draco? and is it reversible? well it probably won't matter once harry finds out. I mean he is HARRY POTTER, right? the impossible for anyone else is possible for him.

well hope you update soon. ja ne ^____^
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH good....I thought it was somebody important but it was just her. I never liked her. Im glad shes dead. Im not glad that she coul totally ruin things for the boys now! That stupid twat. Oh well. I know Draco will get out of this. If he uses the right analogies like the firewhskey and drugs one he will at least be considered. Thankies for teh update!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! Please continue.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! It was just Umbridge! Well I can't say I'm sad to see her go, I do hope that what ever creatures got to her played with their food a little before they ate it, no less than she deserves. And poor Draco, what oh earth is Daphne doing to him! Hopefully Harry can "save" him before something awful happens. Can't wait for the next chapter to see how the Desire potion plays out with the Ministry. I have lots of unanswered questions still.
person angelmuziq
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love all your stories, I can't get enough of them. I love your unique plots and great writing style. Please keep up the good work and always keep writing. I just hope in this story that Daphne stops messing with Draco soon. I cant stand to have her hurt him like she is. How in the world is he going to break their agreement? And when he does I hope that he does something back to her along the lines of what she does to him. I cant believe how cruel and devious she is. I hate her and she doesnt deserve to touch Draco. When they are over I also hope that Draco can reverse all the things that she's done to him. And I hope Harry can get off the potion soon but I know it will be a while because you dont rush things and make the story believable. Anyway please update soon. I always look forward to a new chapter in all of your stories.
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT! they're screwed! there has to be something up! Somebody killed somebody taking desire to make it look like desire ahd killed them! I know it!
person Anon
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
when did they find out there was a side affect to Desire. I reread all the chapters and couldn't find that info. I think you might have skipped that part. if not tell me the chapter so i can read it again. upadate soon please thank you
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A death from Desire? Only if they were allergic to the ingredients and even then I don't believe it. I sooo need chapter 7!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, who died! And how do they know it was from the Desire potion? I sense someone plotting against our heroes, but then again, that is kind of what this story is about... And I loved Draco and Hermione's argument, I can see that happening if the characters were ever forced to become somewhat friendly. Can't wait for the next chapter!