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for An Alchemical Discontent

by Lomonaaeren

person TimeFlys
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Does a happy dance* They got through the committee!!!! Good, now on to the wooing! (Just kidding) I know they still have a lot to deal with- but can I hope for a little
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Regulations are all set now for the potion, so now what will Diggory and Nott come up with to stop Harry and Draco? And I wish Harry all the luck in wooing Draco... Good chapter, keep it up!
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I now seriously want to kill Daphne. What the hell was she thinking put a spell on Draco that does THAT every time he eats something with milk in it?

If he didn't have that family spell he could have died.

I sincerely hope that harry finds out soon and fights Daphne.

I wonder if the potion harry takes will hold all the anger he will feel or will it consume him past the potion where he unleashes it?

It would be cool to see Daphne get the treatment Ginny almost got when she made harry too jealous. You know the event that made him want to go on the potion.

It would also be satisfying to see for me at least. That is if you can't think of something more suiting (which i know you can).

Oh and I know that Harry would have to find out first. I am just saying that once he does he will be able to reverse it because he can do anything. Nothing is impossible for Harry Potter. Especially in the fanfic world

Well hope you update soon. Ja ne ^_____^
person alex
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey just want to say that I love reading your draco/harry stories. I just got into the harry/draco fandom and loving every minute. I wanted to know if your going to continue this story cause I really got into it. Update Soon!!!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Worse then being allergic! Oh poor Draco! I sooo need chapter 9!!!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im nervous for them! I hope everything goes good with the committee!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don't know how Draco stands Harry's complete apathy, it would drive me insane! And I hope Draco at least tries to figure out how to fix whatever is making him have a heart attack when ever he eats any dairy. That is a slightly too convenient way to kill him off for him to leave it hanging on. Can't wait for the Ministry hearing, getting to see Draco in action *smiles*
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
person Moyima
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. Daphne is turning out to be a worse problem than I originally thought. She's vindictive. You'd think she wouldn't want to nearly kill him. Who knew!
person angelmuziq
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate her. I hate her. I Hate Her. I HATE Her!! uughh Daphne needs to die in a most painful torturous slow death as posible. What kind of person Does that?! Please tell me Draco goes to Harry for help. I love that Harry will be the one to chase Draco then the other way around. Its different and unique. I'm more concerned with getting Daphne away from Draco than Harry getting off the potion cause she is Pure EVIL! She may not be as bad as Richard in Forgive Those Who Trespass but she grates on my nerves more somehow. Anyway keep up the fabulous work and please update soon. You have me on the edge of my seat to see what happens next. And also since Harry wont get off the potion until after this story, there will be another one? Huh huh Really?! (is excited for all your stories). See ya next time!