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for An Alchemical Discontent

by Lomonaaeren

person Yume111
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger?!

They both seem to be so stuck in their problems, it feels so frustrating, with no way out, it looks at the moment, especially for Draco. As if his machinations were coming back to haunt him.
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schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well at least now Draco got a few things off his chest! Thanks for answering my question and for the new chapter!
person Dezra
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH PLEASE tell me that I don't have to read Daphne's torture scenes again. It kills me that She is making him do this!!!
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 12!!!
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep going please post soon this is so good and I want more. The way that you allow the story to flow into itself and not stop it is exciting and it drags me in and wont let go.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! They destroyed his shop! Im so angry...and then Harry's magic doing that to Ginny...wow. I cant wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Harry do something!!! I sooo need chapter 11!!!
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I can't help but feel that one chapter Draco is gonna show up missing fingers and not having a voice. Not likely I know, but Daphnes so twisted. And isn't Draco in the shop that is now being torn down brick by brick? Poor guy can't catch a break! And I had a question about Harry's control over his magic. Does he actually have a problem now, or does he just think the still has one. I probably could go back and find out, but I think this way is faster. Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work!
person TimeFlys
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Points finger* Look!! Chapter 11!!!^_^ Do I get a teaser now?! lol. I'm glad that Harry & Ginny are moving in the right direction I just hope it doesn't comeback to bite Harry. Good chapter & Thank You again for the constant updates.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really can't wait to see how Harry handles the Daphne situation. I do think he will need to be on the potion to help Draco get out of this one, the consequences could be dire otherwise. Draco will definitely have to realize that Harry can't see why he is upset, just as with so many men out there, you gotta hit them over the head with it, put a list on the refrigerator, and then take things into your own hands in the end anyway. Love this story, your plots are so different and thought provoking, will be watching for more! Sorry I haven't reviewed since the first time, this was bookmarked on my work laptop and not my personal one so you just got missed until the internet and my home laptop decided to have a falling out, and I am having to use the one for both fun and work.