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for An Alchemical Discontent

by Lomonaaeren

person Yume111
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person Tac
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eep! I really want to know what happens next! Who was that girl and will Hermione catch Daphe? aaaah! That chapter went by so fast :(
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 14!!! Almost sounds like Harry is starting to build a tolerance to his potion. Daphne paid a visit. How wonderful!!! Did she get the information she seeked?
person TimeFlys
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: *Giggle* Good chapter. Looks like Harry might be becoming immune to his potion. Draco will be happy- unless Harry ends up doubling his doses. (That could be trouble!) Thanks for update! And thanks for clearing up the misunderstanding I had from last chapter.

Can
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Could it be that Harry's magic has built up a resistance to the potion and that's why it doesn't seem to be working as it usually does? And Draco seems to take such pride in making his potions, will anything be resolved with his parents in this story? As always thanks for the new chapter and I patiently await your next.
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 13!!!
person TimeFlys
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12: Not my favorite chapter but defiantly necessary to move the plot along. Nice idea coming up with
person Yume111
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, yes it
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, but at least he's started looking on the positive side of things. I have the greatest faith in Hermione
person Yume111
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why is Draco talking about dating Harry all of a sudden, right in the middle of a crisis? Is this his cry for help in a way, or rather his wish for being able to make a leap of faith and bring Harry into this and trust him? And since he wants a strong powerful Harry, is it also his wish to be protected and be taken care of? For things to be simple, at least for a while?
He has always been guarded, felt the need to protect himself, so it must be both appealing and terrifying for him to trust someone else to take care of him.
Harry of course is asking the impossible, he wants Draco to trust him, when he doesn