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for An Alchemical Discontent

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, That was so cool! Un eloquently I know, but still true none the less. Harry actually ,ate, Daphne's magic. That has got to be one of the coolest ways I ever seen Harry rescue anybody. I absolutely can not wait for the third book to start, You've done such a great job so far, I know I wont be disappointed!
person acr1228
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. THough I hope Draco cherishes, protects and woos Harry as well. Frankly, Harry needs it more! I love all of your writings, and your update speed is simply astonishing.
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I cant wait for the next installment! this was excellent!
person Moyima
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great ending! You really set that finale up well. Daphne was so horrible that even Harry eating her magic didn't make her sympathetic. Looking forward to the next segment!
person Yume111
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, another cliffhanger, but I don
person Yume111
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Daphne
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And we take a few more steps forward! I love how you describe the movement from room to room, its very ease to follow and keeps we entertained. Can't wait to read what you have in store next for our hero!
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! a cliffie! So...finally the confrontation between Daphne and Harry! Im so excited!
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I'm afraid I caught the bug and was out sick for a few days, but I'm all better now and back to reading! Lots has happened, it seems, since the last chapter I read, and I'm very interested in seeing Harry go after Daphne, but your being such a tease with your little cliff hanger ending, lol. Your writing is still wonderful and I'm glad to be back to reading it. Keep up the good work!
person SP777
schedule March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, for what it's worth even if you have a future chapter done already...if
you have a ''burning need'' to give us an all out free-for-all fight between
Harry & Daphne, by ALL means go ahead.

Even IF we have to wait a few more days for it. Because at this point, I'd
like to see Harry go all out & let go and show people why he is considered a
powerful wizard. I mean you have to admit, it's time that Daphne got what IS coming
to her.

Besides who doesn't love a rescue mission with some type of justified carnage
at the end. :-)