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for Poetry in Motion

by Utopia

person maddie50
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is a precious moment you have captured when your child says Mama or DaDa. The only problem is as they age you can never get them to stop talking.
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww this was seriously cute :P
person Leah
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I loved that! Great job! The poem was fantastic! :D
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: I always like a warm and fuzzy story and this one was very well done. A cozy morning spent in bed and insights into their life together including just a hint of smutty goodness with au natural Lucius. I enjoyed the tale and got a giggle out of the baby behavior. Thanks for the cute ending!
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That sounded so sweet.
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 (one-shot): My goodness, raise the bar, why don