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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now was it just me or was that almost blackmail? kind of like a 'let me use you and your family can be happy' thing. Harry pretends to put up a good struggle though doesn't he? And Draco lets him because he knows hat in the end he will win. Smug bastard....I love him for it. Thanks for updating.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh holy moly! Harry is WAY over his head! I sooo need chapter 8!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CRUCIFIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT'S THE POSITION HARRY WAS IN ON THE TABLE!!!!! ON HIS BACK WITH HIS HANDS OUTSTRETCHED!!! EVEN THE ANKLES CROSSED AND THE STIGMATA!!!!! *shivers*
Wow, nicely done!!!
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That was it, right? Savior...crucified...and Draco 'despoiling' innocence! I LOVED IT!! That's blasphemous (ha! and I'm one to talk with "This is the Way I Pray") but we are SO going to Hell together!!!!
And after Draco let him down from his 'cross'...he sat on the floor and tried to come to terms with what just happened???
Did I do it??? Do I get gold stars???
Wow, nicely done!!!
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That was it, right? Savior...crucified...and Draco 'despoiling' innocence! I LOVED IT!! That's blasphemous (ha! and I'm one to talk with "This is the Way I Pray") but we are SO going to Hell together!!!!
And after Draco let him down from his 'cross'...he sat on the floor and tried to come to terms with what just happened???
Did I do it??? Do I get gold stars???
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*happy dance* Alright, I'm hooked! You got me! Hopefully the challenge doesn't include Harry or Draco dying (but I AM eyeing that "massacre" skeptically and hoping you mean a metaphorical "massacre" as in "death to het and long live slash"...)
LOL And you get an "AWWWWWWWWW" for Draco's first kiss on the bench!!! And the idea of Snape interrupting couples' snogging sessions with maniacal glee is just PRICELESS!!!
Illness? *perks up* So Ginny's dying? *hope* LOL Awful, aren't I?
Question: aren't Albus and Scorpius in the same year? So why is Scor at Hogwarts and not Al? Technically (if you're picking up after the epilogue) Scorpius, Rose, and Albus should be having their first year while James would be in his (third?) year (but I think THAT is debatable) while Hugo and Lily have to wait another couple of years until they're old enough...*just curious* Unless this is the year BEFORE...but still, why is Rose there if Albus is not? And I thought Teddy had just graduated and was working on becoming an Auror...
*SQUEAL* AND SO IT BEGINS!!! DRACO KISSED HARRY! DRACO KISSED HARRY! YAY!!!!
LOL And you get an "AWWWWWWWWW" for Draco's first kiss on the bench!!! And the idea of Snape interrupting couples' snogging sessions with maniacal glee is just PRICELESS!!!
Illness? *perks up* So Ginny's dying? *hope* LOL Awful, aren't I?
Question: aren't Albus and Scorpius in the same year? So why is Scor at Hogwarts and not Al? Technically (if you're picking up after the epilogue) Scorpius, Rose, and Albus should be having their first year while James would be in his (third?) year (but I think THAT is debatable) while Hugo and Lily have to wait another couple of years until they're old enough...*just curious* Unless this is the year BEFORE...but still, why is Rose there if Albus is not? And I thought Teddy had just graduated and was working on becoming an Auror...
*SQUEAL* AND SO IT BEGINS!!! DRACO KISSED HARRY! DRACO KISSED HARRY! YAY!!!!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, my bad...I didn't realize that you had already answered the whole "year" question...
LMAO McGonagall thought Draco hexed Harry!!! PRICELESS!!! (Can't blame her...they're not friends--yet)
*swoon* Kicking puppies!!!! I LOVE IT!!! That's so cute!!! and drinking leads to...other stuff!!!! *squeal*
*whimper* OH MY GOD!!! I LOVE that scene where Draco's like "I'm your puppy to kick!!" OH GOD that's GREAT!!! SO GOOD!!! KUDOS TO YOU!!!! I can't really even explain WHY I love it so much, other than Draco is making himself vulnerable, but HARRY WON'T HURT HIM!!!!!!!
*howling* AND THEN YOU ENDED THE CHAPTER JUST WHEN IT WAS ABOUT TO GET GOOD!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOL
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh my GOD that was worth the wait!!!! HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!! that was amazing!!! I don't know how you do the descriptions like you do, but that was fucking great!!!
Certain image of Harry? As...submissive? Confused about his sexuality? Honestly, I prefer top/dominant Harry and bottom/submissive Draco...but in this case, I think it worked perfectly that Draco was going after something he wanted and Harry let him (as opposed to using force to push him away, especially since Draco had just offered himself up as a sacrifice for Harry to hurt and Harry refused, so I can see how pushing his advances away would hurt even worse...)
And the part about Draco wanting to know if Harry didn't want to hurt him because Draco "wasn't good enough" for even THAT kind of attention from the Golden Boy gave me SHIVERS!!! LOVED IT!!!
But now I'm all curious as to the 'image' of Harry because I really, really suck at guessing...so please don't feel bad if I get it all wrong...because it's not you, it's me!
LMAO McGonagall thought Draco hexed Harry!!! PRICELESS!!! (Can't blame her...they're not friends--yet)
*swoon* Kicking puppies!!!! I LOVE IT!!! That's so cute!!! and drinking leads to...other stuff!!!! *squeal*
*whimper* OH MY GOD!!! I LOVE that scene where Draco's like "I'm your puppy to kick!!" OH GOD that's GREAT!!! SO GOOD!!! KUDOS TO YOU!!!! I can't really even explain WHY I love it so much, other than Draco is making himself vulnerable, but HARRY WON'T HURT HIM!!!!!!!
*howling* AND THEN YOU ENDED THE CHAPTER JUST WHEN IT WAS ABOUT TO GET GOOD!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LOL
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh my GOD that was worth the wait!!!! HOLY FUCKING SHIT!!!! that was amazing!!! I don't know how you do the descriptions like you do, but that was fucking great!!!
Certain image of Harry? As...submissive? Confused about his sexuality? Honestly, I prefer top/dominant Harry and bottom/submissive Draco...but in this case, I think it worked perfectly that Draco was going after something he wanted and Harry let him (as opposed to using force to push him away, especially since Draco had just offered himself up as a sacrifice for Harry to hurt and Harry refused, so I can see how pushing his advances away would hurt even worse...)
And the part about Draco wanting to know if Harry didn't want to hurt him because Draco "wasn't good enough" for even THAT kind of attention from the Golden Boy gave me SHIVERS!!! LOVED IT!!!
But now I'm all curious as to the 'image' of Harry because I really, really suck at guessing...so please don't feel bad if I get it all wrong...because it's not you, it's me!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now see, I'm really curious...and I want double gold stars!!! The line "hero-husband's hidden self" intrigues me...has Harry been harboring feelings for Draco (or at least, guys) before this???
Because at first, Harry used Draco's given name quite a lot, and I wasn't sure if that was just to try to throw him off or because they had a 'history' (much like the one they're making now)
I hope you update soon and let us know what you were going for!!! (and again, I'm sorry because I SUCK at guessing!)
Because at first, Harry used Draco's given name quite a lot, and I wasn't sure if that was just to try to throw him off or because they had a 'history' (much like the one they're making now)
I hope you update soon and let us know what you were going for!!! (and again, I'm sorry because I SUCK at guessing!)
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Right now, I really, really hate Malfoy. I wish I could hurt him, badly in that, for ripping Harry's life apart. Do that for me, please?
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7! He seduced him and then practically threw him away?! Hoping Harry comes running back for more! I'm floored!!! Sooo need more!
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha....yeah i actually thought of one but there would be no way to do it.*sighs* by the way....THAT WAS SOOOOO HOT DARLING! WHERE did you learn to write like that!? Jesus! I had my mouth open like from the beginning to end! WOW! Oh please say there will be more...poor little potter. Draco is so evil....there should be more of his sexy evilness...and more helpless adorable harry! Update soon dear!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi ^_^
Really like the pace, it's well-written. Just when I think I should get back to work, someone comes up
with another good story. hurray for fan fiction...
ha ha.