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by Severusluciusallthebadboys

schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I hope that Luna can either be rescued and returned to school or will be taken by Lucius to another location. As for Ginny, I think that she really wants Severus now and is only pretending to hate him. I look forward to reading more.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. That was so hot Ginny on top of Snape. PLEASE don't stop updating. I wanna see how this ends. Nellie
person Hermyone
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, really enjoying the unique pairings, keep up the good work.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awsome. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanx for the shout-out.
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo I'm loving this story. Can you message me when you update? noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au
I loved the scene with Luna and Lucius in the dungeon. Tasty. Nellie
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good work. Thanks for sharing!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated. I was wait forever lol. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have started in a very interesting place. I agree wholeheartedly that Snape spent an entirely uncomfortable year as the Headmaster with the Carrows hovering nearby, waiting for anyone to slip. If I may offer just a hint to make your story easier to read, I suggest paragraphs or line breaks between paragraphs so that the text isn't so jumbled together on the screen.

Thank you for sharing,
Pitt

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