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by Severusluciusallthebadboys

schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It's good. Better than I expected. I especially enjoyed the dEath Eater's humour about Luna and her father. It was funny.
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ginny. At least she has her memories of the times she was with Severus. Too bad Severus died. I think that he and Ginny would have been happy together. Hopefully Luna and Lucius can get back together and be happy with each other. I have enjoyed reading this story. Is it really finished or is there more.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I hope that Lucius does find Luna again and decides to be with her forever. I hope that Ginny and Severus will also get together as a couple. I look forward to reading more.
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know that I've really enjoyed your story and I do hope inspiration strikes for you to work on it some more. :) I enjoy stories where Snape is portrayed as he is... GOOD. I especially love stories where he has to put on his evil front. That gives him a very sexy advantage. Anyhoo... love the story and hope to see more of it! :)
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update this story anymore. I would love to see what happens to Luna now that she is with Lucius again, and what about Ginny and Severus. Please continue.
person meggy7
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm liking this! Love the Luna and Lucius thing. He is so hot and I like the way he is sweet to her. Thanks for a good story!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I'm writing this review in the hope you will continue on with it. I know what it's like to write and upload a chappie and have next to no one out there review but hang in there! Each review is a treasure and a little inspiration to keep going....so keep going! I think you write really really well!!

Well done!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon. I'm so happy that you did. *giggle* Ahhh. I love lucius and luna.
person Lenuca
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting plot and nice writing. This chapter was really hot and I hope it isn't the last one so keep updating, please