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for You Raise Me Up

by Kooldragon400

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well hermione's idea is a new and interesting developement. can't wait to see what happens now that she will be living with the malfoy's. as for lucius...he can have whatever he wants...lol. happy writing!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better. I love the twist on Hermione by Percy,and I look forward to
the next surprise.

I love writing and I am proud of my stories, I cannot give you a higher compliment,
in saying I wish I had thought of the plot.

Best wishes,
person skydancer
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*GIGGLES!!!!* and runs to the cupboard for a new jar of cloudberry jam to Show Lucius that they are like golden raspberries ( its a Canadian thing...) and Grabs a tub of butterscotch ..just..in.case.......

ch.4 is great btw.....
person skydancer
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
......I like blackberry jam.....or cloudberry.....mmmmmmmmmm
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think the story is moving along well. hope lucius doesn't receive the Kiss as i am on my way to purchase the jam...lol. anywho, looking forward to the next chapter! happy writing!
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant start look forward to reading more. Best wishes,
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update. here are some carrots for the bunnies...definitely don't want them to starve, and as for lucius...yum!!! lol. happy writing!
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it was goood more please!
person Violet eyes
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please continue
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think you've got a fairly good start here. its not too heavy on the angst so far, so thats ok with me. i like it and i am wondering if harry saw the celebratory kiss hermione gave draco and what he will say about it. looking forward to more.