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for You Raise Me Up

by Kooldragon400

schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
She better say yes! :) I vote for smut for everyone - Lucius & Narcissa, Draco & Hermione, AND Sev & Bella. Call it a post V-day treat...
person -B-
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definitely joined in for the group "awww" :)
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and still very much enjoying. I just love your Bella.
Best wishes.
person distinctlyME
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*love sigh* oh that was yummy. and sweet. and I'm really loving who Bella is in this story. more subdued, but still fiery when needed to be. and I love that Harry did that, and that Bella is so fond of Hermione, it's kind of cute. and snape being all nervous. LOVED IT. you are good my dear.

update soon.
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I haven't reviewed the last chapter or two so here you go... I could sort of understand where Lucius was coming from and why he got mad about hermione being pregnant but i was very upset with him for slapping narcissa...i love the way you have written her as a character who is strong and not some weak character who cannot stand up for herself. And the fact that deep down Lucius wasn't mad so much as concerned for hermione and draco was good, i'm glad he wasn't too stubborn about it.

I don't like Percy, never really liked him in the books either so hopefully he will get back some of what he has dished out. Especially his disrespect of Bellatrix. Oh and Snape proposed...YAY!!! Ok, I am waiting for more.... so until then Happy Writing!!!
person Monica
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really didn't see any errors at all and that is something that I look for carefully and really bother me so I have no idea what that person was talking about. So far I am really enjoying the story thus far. I'll definitely check out anything else you have up.
person Monica
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Americans really aren't that bad. I hate George Bush and I don't talk with a twang. That song was prolly popular like 12 years ago. I mean at least we don't have to claim Kerry Katona and Pete Dougherty or Jodie Marsh for that matter...oh I forgot about Chantelle Houghton too. Katie Price isn't bad though...watch what ya say about us...a lot of Americans are pretty bad but once ya get to know us we're not all backwoods gun-toting hillbillies. Oh yea I could go on about Dentists...just kidding. Good story though aside from the across the pond bashing.
person smatizio
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...poor Severus :) I'm really enjoying this story, as well as your notes at the bottom. Can't wait to see where it goes...
person skydancer
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yep...you do good very well! I absolutely love how you've written Bella here. Seriously, you need to do a side story on Bella an Severus!
person kazfeist
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well done! And, I hope we find out which Auror did it....so sanctimonious Percy can apologize in public for the sham of his Ministry. :D