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for You Raise Me Up

by Kooldragon400

schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay...Answers!! and for that the bunnies shall get loads more carrots!!! hmmm...wonder what's next for our eccentric family. I love this story as you have a great mix of characters coming together that i don't think i've seen in any other story. keep up the fabulous work.... i have to say that the line hermione used "Don't look at me, I'm hideous." had me laughing really hard. i have almost one year old twins who love the Care Bears and in one of the newer care bears movies Wish Bear uses that line. so as i read it all i could picture was a greenish blue bear saying 'don't look at me, i'm hideous'. Happy Writing!!!!!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great great work!!
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Remus being alive. I guess anti-werewolf laws have been strengthened since the end of the war. Now Hermione's going to have to harass Percy yet again...

Love it, and looking forward to seeing what happens. :)
person Allie
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, guilt trip about the bunnies....lol. great chapter with an excellent twist. Can't wait to see how the others react to Lupin. Why doesn't Harry know anything of where Lupin is now? hopefully all will be explained in the next chapter....happy writing!! oh and lots of carrots because we have to keep those bunnies happy!!!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And Lupin re-enters! Whoo hoooo! I can't wait to the next chapter to see what happens at the Leaky Cauldron. Please update really soon!
person Readingwoman777
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, hmm, I have to say I am not a fan of spanking & pain as a form of love play. Just don't see how that can be a thing to do to someone you love. What's more, Hermione PROMISED she was not going to hurt Draco: how does what she did square with that? I suppose it was well-written, but let's not have anymore, pretty please??
person Readingwoman777
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh good! I'm glad to see the return of Remus Lupin. He will make an excellent addition to the group, & provide more challenges to reconciliation/tolerance etc. It seems to me he will need mental as well as physical healing, as he & the adults learn to abide each other.
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like how you're developing Bellatrix's character. Can't wait to read more!
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who hooooooooooooooo smut smut smut!

I loved this chapter and I hope the next chapter will be just as good! Please update soon!