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for You Raise Me Up

by Kooldragon400

person MotekElm
schedule April 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It is a nice long complete Dramione, but the characters are too OOC for me. The whole story seems a bit childish.

person lizkrohn
schedule December 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great story but Lyra needs a good cuddle and then a good hiding!

schedule September 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I adored this story! Bella was just a delight!
person mili
schedule March 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
no me gusta
lo siento pero la historia es MUUUUUUUUUY mala
person SilverStorm
schedule September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A great story, I enjoyed it very much....Thank You :)
person steph
schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi I'm not sure if you know but the symbols/punctuation marks are weird diamond shape black things with a question mark in the centre of it.
I am enjoying reading your story but the symbols are quite distracting.
schedule September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say this story was great! I was hoping in the epi they had about 10 kids ROFL she DID say she wanted to give Molly a run for her money in number of children lol.
person Sam
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I lol'd when I read "his crotch re-activated". For some reason, the phrasing made me picture something robotic with flashing lights... Possibly a speaker system or maybe a bunch of switches that no one knows the purpose of. My mind is a strange place. Great story do far!

~Sam
person sonja
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story is good, but I'm not crazy about how off some of the Slytherins are.... Bellatrix and Hermione having a sleepover? Come to think of it, Harry and Ron allienating Hermione and Mrs. Weasley shutting her out seems wildly wrong as well. The writing is good and I like your idea, but I can't get over the wild character shifts.
person Anon
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story was really good :)