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for Hermione

by InkStainedWretch

person amsev
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sneaky Snape! Sounds like he's still trying to be the Gay Seducer. Well, maybe not gay, but you know what I mean. After this all blows up and the war happens (because seduction and other such "petty" concerns definitely take second place to life and death matters), methinks Hermione still has her work cut out for her getting him to toe the line. I am eagerly waiting to see where you will take this story. Update soonest!
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So they're going to have the sexual equivalent of the condemned man's last breakfast? Sounds like an intense scene coming up then.

I liked Snape's brief eye-close of relief - could just see that - and Dumbledore's wrinkles consuming his very identity. I've seen a few faces like that.

High anticipation tinged with worry for the next chapter then. Looking forward to your SS/OFC offering too.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhh =)

i like it =D
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting chapter. I can't wait to read more.
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person DB1
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@7 lol awesome chapter update soon

*DB*
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HA HA HA, excellent! How funny! I loved this chapter, from all angles. The seductive Snape touch, Hermione's standing up for herself and the hilarious ending - great! There is so much heat between your protagonists one could catch fire just reading about them.

Will be checking out your originals later xx.
person amsev
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.