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for Hermione

by InkStainedWretch

schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope you decide to come back and finish this at some point, I have really enjoyed reading it.
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised that Hermione is so slow on the uptake. She is suspicious of every move SS makes, but does not see through Harry's apology? Especially when she had heard nothing from him for so long. He is only "apologizing" because he thinks that it will get in the way of her and Ron being together if he does not. Just goes to show how people assign trust. p
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finish this story? I looked at the last date when I hit this chapter and was afraid that you may have decided to move to something else. p
person whatweareafraidof
schedule September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
not bad a little hard on run he think he with the girl he loves and then she get the job and she dumps him... i understand him being hurt.... i hope they go back to being friends
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: Stonehenge! I mentioned Wiltshire as having magic in my latest chapter of 'Beyond the Veil'. Genius minds
person mlui
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad there's a sequel! Otherwise, it would have been an ending that didn't really end. So far, this is going along quite nicely. Why are they going to Malfoy Manor again? I know Voldemort is there but other than Voldemort, I don't see the purpose of infiltrating Malfoy Manor. I mean, it's extremely risky for both Severus and Hermione. Especially, for Severus's spy status and to be seen together. Please update soon! =)
person Tenar10r
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: OMG Voldemort is getting ready to take Hogwarts? And Hermione is surrounded by spies? Rather inept ones, it sounds like, which is good. Maybe Dumbledore and company can use those spies to send misleading info to Voldemort.

Snape and Hermione heading out into the wilderness to