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I was really enjoying it till we got to biscuits for breakfast! LOL. So not PC. What the hell is that????????? Anyway, try golden crumpets slathered in butter and honey or fluffy ENGLISH muffins toasted with butter and jam or a bacon butty. MMmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. yum.

You could always suspend your disbelief!

hahaha poor Sev being tempted :D

update soon!

"I'll eat the whole pan of delicious biscuits, but only because it will make you shut up."

Ah ha ha... oh Severus... he's like a petulant child sometimes.

Hermione seems to have warmed up to this younger version of Snape quite quickly... I'm glad. Can't wait for your next update.

This lokks if it will be a very good story the chapters a brill looking forward to the next update

too true it would not be a severus and hermione fic if not for sexual tension! ;) also dont worry about the slow build up for it just makes it longer-i mean better. (oops) i love that he was distracted and in such a good way too. :) she is so bad! i love it! well my dear what next?

1. i am really looking froward to the stroy i love long stories! 2. love timeturner fics (also marriage law fics) 3. i do hope that you 'enless editing' will be done-after- you finish the story. for i have had some authors who get too carried away with editing and never finish the stories for the never think it is good enough or forget where they are going with the story, etc. and never finish it. so please if you are going to edit during just please, please finish it!!! 4. i do love this story! so please, PLEASE update. :) also i am really glad that ron is out of the picture. THANKS! :)

I like it. Please update soon.

Well, I for one am anxiously awaiting chapter four. Loved that you've kept the characters relatively in-character and the sexual tension! -- LJ

Great start!!

cant wait to read more!

its good! :D