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Chapter 20: Draco's brilliant! I know there was a reason I liked him- besides his body, and Slytherin sexiness that is. ^_^

Chapter 19: *Clasps hands with big smile, & tears in eyes* Draco got his wand back! So happy- and their celebration session was wonderfully written. (Must be hard to write with Harry unable to move.) Can

very very good chapter
keep going and post soon
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Ch. 19 Goodness, that was intense, surprisingly so since Harry couldn't feel anything below the waist. But I've read the best sex starts with the mind and this proves that a great imagination can overcome many difficulties.

I'm sure that Draco will be able to find a way to heal Harry or die trying. He's not a Slytherin for nothing.

wow, it's so heart wrenching! But I think of all your H/D couples, their love is the deepest.
I've never thought about what it must be like for couples with issues like this. So different and frustrating and intimate in a different way. hmmm

Sooo need chapter 19!! Oh I fear for him!!!

very very good chapter keep going and post soon
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Ch. 18 I feel almost as frustrated as Harry. You delineate wonderfully the sensations that are running through his mind and body while he tries to please his lover. The weird disconnection between his memory and his body come through clearly with every word; it's like we're right there with him in his struggle.

It's obvious that he's going to be struggling with feelings of depression, rage and frustration and you're making all that very credible. Draco's misery and helplessness are an equal factor. Let's hope both men remember that they have friends and family who can help them cope. They're not alone in this.

*Cries softly in corner* This was a really bitter/sweet chapter and I found myself being drawn in by the heavy emotions. I hope everything starts working out soon- *Cries again for Harry*


By the way: Good job.

Love, love, love... One of the best H/D fics I've ever read.