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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good keep going and post soon
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 22 Now HERE was an intriguing twist. I loved it! Like Harry, I'd gotten so used to Draco's wolf form that it no longer mattered to me. But having Draco shift into his pre-lupine state was exciting, almost a novelty. You've also left us with the promise of more to come. How delicious. Squeee! Thanks and I'm looking forward to those chapters. Next time, he'll even get to bang Harry, too. Excccccellllllent.
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is sooooo cute! He really loves Draco and it always suprises Draco...they make me "awww" Good chapter!
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 21 I can't believe that Harry would interrupt Draco while he's making a potion of that Draco would let him. What if it had blown up or boiled over? Tsk tsk. But it was smoking. But a couch in the lab wouldn't be a good idea. All those odors soaking into the nap. Ugh.
It was a cute scene with Elise on the swings. Time must be moving fairly quickly if she's gone from crawling to walking to running in the space of a few chapters. But I wondered why they had to go among Muggles. Don't they have kiddie swings in the wizarding world?
It was a cute scene with Elise on the swings. Time must be moving fairly quickly if she's gone from crawling to walking to running in the space of a few chapters. But I wondered why they had to go among Muggles. Don't they have kiddie swings in the wizarding world?
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
VERY good chapter keep going and post soon
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how wonderful!!! I sooo need chapter 22!!!
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March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21: XD Good chapter! Very cute. Loved the swing thing at the end- great idea.
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how wonderful!!! I sooo need chapter 21!!!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 20 That was so hot and powerful. It's not just the sex in these chapters that makes them so strong and influential; it's the attendant emotion. The joy, lust and hope shine through all their scenes together, making each encounter special in its own right. Harry's desire and Draco's tentative hope that everything will be all right in the end are so palpable! Thanks for all your efforts.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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