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for Ever Observant

by Pho3niX

person Anon
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Alisha
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's fascinating so far! I like where this is going! Please continue soon!
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderfully enticing, I hope you continue!
person Em
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The writing style is great, very intriguing plot so far. Is there more? I hope so...
person Mishka
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drools* You brought up points about Hermione that I have been thinking about, so the "Rock on I totally agree" Aspect in me can't wait to see where you take it. At two-shot right? If so I want to see how Blaise gets Hermione in the last chapter. I also like dhow Blaise understood the hardest part would be convincing Hermione that he wanted all of her for a long amount of time. It made me sappy. Being an author endeared with Hermione and wishing for understanding males (if manipulative, but we can forgive that as long a he takes care of Hermione) s she doesn't have to be as defensive I am very happy to read this. It was short and to the point but everything fit and no one seemed OOC. Probably because it's Blaise...Anyhow, I really can't wait for the udpate!
person :(
schedule February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to finish! I LOVE the story :) but I've been checking for the update every few days since you posted and I'm dying to hear the end... well not dying, but I don't want to wait to hear how you finish it. :( I Miss YOU!
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person Dark
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's good, i like it... i look forward to the second part.

~Dark
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like how you showed the gradual build in interest instead of him suddenly deciding out of the blue that he was in love. True to slytheran character, sneaky and possesive. I will keep a look out for update and I hope to see more from you soon.
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story, can't wait to reaf the rest!