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October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please don't give up on this story! It's amazing so far! I really love the character you've given to Blaise! I very much hope you finish this story
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I look forward to seeing more, if you do indeed intend to write it.
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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I know it's been ages since you've updated this story, but I just had to review. I love the style of your writing. You're descriptions are detailed and, as far as I'm concerned, quite accurate. I hope you decide to continue with this story because you're off to a very promising start.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great start -- please continue. love how you take us through all the hogwarts years and just end it with the start of the story. the question I have is has Hermione noticed him?
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More, More, I say!
What a great buildup, a great setup! I love the little things he notices about her, the thing about how she wears her hair, etc. Also the way he is tanlized by the wyay she does not show her body, mmm. Intriguing! Please, more soon!
What a great buildup, a great setup! I love the little things he notices about her, the thing about how she wears her hair, etc. Also the way he is tanlized by the wyay she does not show her body, mmm. Intriguing! Please, more soon!
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December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting so far. please keep it up and update soon! when you do update, can you drop me an e-mail at ohsnap_theresa@yahoo[dot]com? i'd really appreciate the gesture! thanks!!
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great prologue...really well written: seductive with overtones of edge and just the right amount of dark
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*grins madly* I think that this is a very wonderful first chapter to what is going to be a great story. You developed Blaise so well! He doesn't come off as shallow or undeveloped--and you created character traits that fit in with his marked absence int he real books. XD I can't wait until you update! Especially since his last observations prelude a wonderful relationship with Hermione.
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like the plot. i wonder what steps he'll take to have her... hopefully you'll update soon. simply looking forward to everything.
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice build up, I like the progression of his interest. And he seems a little dangerous for her, which is very interesting as well.
Can't wait for more.
Can't wait for more.