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by lilmisblack

person Leah
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How dare you?! How dare you make me cry?! That was so sad and beautiful. You made it so heart piercing. Remus is written well, trying to hang onto part of Hermione, even if it wasn't really her.

But can't you make it happy? Like, Hermione isn't really dead and she comes back to him? And he thinks it is Tonks at first and then she proves that it is really her? I like happy endings, damn it! *cries*

Okay, so don't change the ending just cause of me and my oddness.

It is really a great, sad story. Good job!