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for The Guardian

by rachelmary

schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So are you ever going to finish this one? It sounds like a good idea for a fic.
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey you've got to update this one please i want to know what's going to happen next. update soonn. keep up the hard work. Peace! :)
person Makovaso
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story, please update soon.
person Gypsii
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapters to come. Though it would be nice if the chapters where longer.
person kneeya
schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen next?! Please up-date soon.
person kneeya
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm entranced by this story. Thank you so much.
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please. This is really good so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person pinktarg
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good idea, but more detail would make it better. For instance, what happened when Harry left the room? Also, you might want to turn on your spell check. It won't catch everything but will help. Hint: the number 2 is spelled two not to.
person Makovaso
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story, update soon.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has the potential to be very interesting, but you need a beta. It's a very good idea, one that I don't remember seeing anywhere until now. I wouldn't mind checking the chapters before you post them if you can't find a beta elsewhere.