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Good start

very interesting.

update soon!

Awww! Big bad salazar protecting abused!harry! More Please!

OH, so cool! Only I don't understand what Hermione is doing there. And does Salazar know about the Voldemort-Boy-who-Lived-Heir-of-Slytherin-War-Type-thingy?

that's not fair it was a short chapter! *pout* I want a bigger chapter... because I reviewed and you luvvvvv reviews! ^_~ so update soon, I wait with baited breath!
*swoon*

Ooh HIS...I like that. I love it when they get possesive. Good chapter, n dont worry sometimes the author just has to do short chapters.

Pretty good start. I'm assuming that Sal doesn't know anything about the war since he's been locked up in the chamber? And a question where did Hermione come from?

I have a little constructive criticism: Hermione seemed to appear out of thin air. So I would sugest don't have someone just be there. Use a description like: While staring at each other Salazar and Harry missed the sound of the door creaking open and the body that slipped in... something like that so we know that 'ok someone else is in the room'. We don't need to know who right away, but so we don't think we missed them in the begining.

Other then that I say, keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Me like-e! Very interesting indeed. *Nods.* Please update soon! lol

love it . i just lov it ... please let salazxar kick voldies arse

Yay! you updated, good chapter.